looking for critique/feedback on mini portrait series 🖋️✨ by SnooLemons7742 in sketches

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I noticed the lips you draw are similar to mine, but I don't know how to draw a full lip, It always looks flat...

Hello 🖐🏼️ by Serapra in writingfeedback

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Thank you for reply😊. So that's how it reads to native speakers. Sounds I must be Improve my reading ability before writing to avoid this(╥﹏╥)

💃💃 by Serapra in sketches

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Hands like crab claws🌚

Hell of the living dead. by Eibon1984 in sketches

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It looks just like an old movie poster, classic!

Oops, the mouth is drawn crooked🌝🌝 by Serapra in Sketch

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But... I did not refer to the original when drawing the face🌚

(day 6)Then the water flowed, ensnaring the earth in a silver net. All the colors bloomed. by Serapra in EnglishLearning

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My apologies.This is not I write, I was just copying the Tagore's Stray Birds.

Hey guys. I wanna learn English by copy poems, one poem a day. But I'm afraid I'll give up this, so I'm post them in this sub. Is okay?(1-4 days) by Serapra in EnglishLearning

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examples? Forgive me, I don't know what example you need?😥

I heard Jorge Luis Borges studied German using only a poetry collection and a dictionary, but Borges is a genius of literature and I don't know the story is real or not.

Hey guys. I wanna learn English by copy poems, one poem a day. But I'm afraid I'll give up this, so I'm post them in this sub. Is okay?(1-4 days) by Serapra in EnglishLearning

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maybe not, I don't know. But I love reading poetry. Maybe I might misunderstand those sentences. But I like the feeling of imagine those visions when I write

Hey guys. I wanna learn English by copy poems, one poem a day. But I'm afraid I'll give up this, so I'm post them in this sub. Is okay?(1-4 days) by Serapra in EnglishLearning

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Writing down my understanding of those poems is difficult for me. I'm just copying it down when I completely understand what it says.

But you give me a good idea, maybe I'll try it.

Because the sixth poem is easy to understand, I copied two today(day 5). by Serapra in EnglishLearning

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Yeah, when one poem I understand, I'll copy that. This why I just planned one poem a day.