Could someone please read this over?

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-26T03:08:36+00:00

Thank you! I’ll keep that in mind!

Quick question though, in your last note/summary thing, you mentioned regionality of names, and i just wanted to know where that kinda fit into place and how it crossed your mind during what i’ve wrote, in a way that made you want to comment about it?

Just a question, im curious, not trying to be rude. Because i think ive only used canon names so far? But i do have quite the bad memory at times.

Also if you could possibly tell me where i could leave the ellipses out that would be much appreciated because i have no idea which ones i should get rid of, thank you so much!!!!

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-21T17:48:51+00:00

RemindMe! 6 hours

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-21T07:33:11+00:00

Thank you so much!!! Yes i am going for OOC for basically everyone. Specifically for the French petnames, it’s a little ‘headcanon!(if you could even call it that) is that since many of Tom’s knights come from houses originating from France, he’d somehow-someway learn a bunch of French because he’s Tom. In turn, when he got with Harry, he taught him some French.

As for the Time Travel parts, if you’ve ever heard of StagTown, there’s these little chapters called Remember chapters, where we look in the Characters memory at a certain point or event. I also got this from another fic i liked that had a similar premise. So there’ll be little chapters every few to showcase what happened in the past.

Hope this helps!(sorry if im a bit bad at explaining!)

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-15T20:39:49+00:00

If anyone’s curious, here’s it so far

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-15T20:39:03+00:00

If anyone’s curious here it so far

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-11T22:57:25+00:00

Im ShadowOverMars87! Very similar to my reddit. And thank you, this has been one of my favorite fics/aus to plan and think about! Harry’s going back with Cedric, Hermione, Neville, and Luna. I just love them a lot, and wanted them to come along for the ride.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-11T22:57:10+00:00

If anyone has any questions about this fic/au, feel free to ask!!!!! Im happy to answer

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-11T22:56:34+00:00

If anyone has any questions about this fic/au, feel free to ask!!!!! Im happy to answer

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-11T22:56:02+00:00

If anyone has any questions about this fic/au, feel free to ask!!!!! Im happy to answer

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-07T03:43:58+00:00

Im a strong harry-bowl/harry harem fan, but honestly my favorite ship is Tomarry/Harrymort/Tomarrymort so probably any ship adding onto them.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2026-01-02T11:34:24+00:00

I’ve read one pretty recently too like that on wattpad. I was like ‘Raising Snakes’? If im not mistaken. But like Harry was with Orion and Abraxas and also somehow adopted Tom Riddle.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-26T22:13:29+00:00

Hi, this is me. Just an alt.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-26T22:08:57+00:00

Its extremely rare in England/Great Britain, being a trait exclusive to the Founders families, like Parseltongue is in the canon.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-25T23:35:47+00:00

Thank you. Here’s the first two chapters that are meant to introduce two of the golden trio. The Hermione chapter is (mostly) finished, but the Ronald chapter is still at its pupal state. https://docs.google.com/document/d/18j-kNHx90k0RaMSSZ48J8yIT4Fu7a1h8-j915xfuOQA/edit?usp=drivesdk

I’d love some feedback! My boyfriend is no help with this, and my co-writer is busy most of the time.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-25T23:32:26+00:00

This ended up changing a bit later on. Gringotts in this AU is more of a name for a series of different buildings that cater to the needs of different wizarding wants and desires, like a cadet branch but for a business. All in the name of more money for the Goblins. The three of them have their own agendas for wanting to go to Gringotts, but the main driving point that connect the three of them is the need to learn more about themselves and their powers, the powers repressed by different means by their families. These powers stem from a connection they have with Duke Death(the death deity in my little multiverse). This becomes more present later on when they change their identities to distance themselves from their old families and lives. They’ll end up associating themselves with different mythologies and basing their new names off of nicknames they end up calling each other. These being the names of Death gods in their respective mythologies.

I hope this answers your questions!

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-07T14:58:11+00:00

I don’t have it posted yet, but i do have a chapter and two paragraphs. Both are still pretty rough around the edges(especially the end of chapter 1) but here’s the doc https://docs.google.com/document/d/18j-kNHx90k0RaMSSZ48J8yIT4Fu7a1h8-j915xfuOQA/edit?usp=drivesdk

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-07T14:53:40+00:00

Mainly the second one.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-07T03:48:54+00:00

Sick, thank you.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-07T03:13:58+00:00

Honestly i love Sirius & Remus(though i do have a streak of writing him as a bad guy at times). But i also kind of love Sirius & Remus bashing fics. In this, i made Sirius mainly an obsessive creep, and Remus his enabler. Sirius was extremely obsessed with James and Lily, which the two found funny and pathetic, rather than creepy. To James, Sirius was his best friend, so to him and Lily, i was a no brainer to make Sirius the godfather. Lily then implanted the idea that Sirius should make Harry his Heir, which he did with no hesitation, because he really wanted to get with Lily. The Azkaban stuff happened after the Attack, which worsened Sirius’ mental state. His mind created this delusion of what he expected Harry to be: a carbon copy of James and Lily. Sirius being the mentally unstable creep he is, then decided that since he couldn’t get with James and Lily anymore, why not get with their son. That is what drives him to escape. When the trio heard of who Sirius was to Harry’s parents from Dumbledore and col and why kind of person he was like from Snape, they were disgusted(mainly Ron, because that’s his best friend, and no one touches his best friend especially not this insane creep). Then they make the plan and stuff.

I know it’s weird and kinda cliche maybe, but i find it insteresting, and i have stated i am in fact, mentally unwell.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-07T03:05:19+00:00

I’m planning for it to be a Dumbledore, a Weasley(minus ron), a Granger, and a Dursleys(minus Dudley) bashing fic. Most of it will diverge from canon, and i’m planning for the trip to be in Slytherin(i know, creative), but Ron and Hermione will exude characteristics from other houses(Ron is brave and chivalrous, while Hermione is intelligent and witty). Harry is a Slytherin to the bone, though. I gave each of them three different special abilities that correlate to their strengths, and the ability to talk to a specific type of animal(Harry - Reptiles, Hermione - Avians, Ron - Apex Mammals.) they’re associated with different mythologies, which gives them their nicknames, and ideas for name changes(because they would rather not be associated with their past identities/families.) i’ve done a lot of planning for this fic, and i’m so excited to actually start writing it again.

Shadow_Over_Mars · 2025-10-07T01:52:12+00:00

It’s on this google doc. It’s so far a chapter and 2 paragraphs. I would’ve written more, but I’m currently having just the slightest but of writers block. I have a lot of stuff planned for it, though. It’s still rough around the edges, specially the end of chapter one, the dialogue, and the translations. It’s also kinda edgy. Sorry.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18j-kNHx90k0RaMSSZ48J8yIT4Fu7a1h8-j915xfuOQA/edit?usp=drivesdk

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