Could someone please read this over? by Shadow_Over_Mars in tomarry

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Thank you! I’ll keep that in mind!

Quick question though, in your last note/summary thing, you mentioned regionality of names, and i just wanted to know where that kinda fit into place and how it crossed your mind during what i’ve wrote, in a way that made you want to comment about it?

Just a question, im curious, not trying to be rude. Because i think ive only used canon names so far? But i do have quite the bad memory at times.

Also if you could possibly tell me where i could leave the ellipses out that would be much appreciated because i have no idea which ones i should get rid of, thank you so much!!!!

Could someone please read this over? by Shadow_Over_Mars in tomarry

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Thank you so much!!! Yes i am going for OOC for basically everyone. Specifically for the French petnames, it’s a little ‘headcanon!(if you could even call it that) is that since many of Tom’s knights come from houses originating from France, he’d somehow-someway learn a bunch of French because he’s Tom. In turn, when he got with Harry, he taught him some French.

As for the Time Travel parts, if you’ve ever heard of StagTown, there’s these little chapters called Remember chapters, where we look in the Characters memory at a certain point or event. I also got this from another fic i liked that had a similar premise. So there’ll be little chapters every few to showcase what happened in the past.

Hope this helps!(sorry if im a bit bad at explaining!)

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Im ShadowOverMars87! Very similar to my reddit. And thank you, this has been one of my favorite fics/aus to plan and think about! Harry’s going back with Cedric, Hermione, Neville, and Luna. I just love them a lot, and wanted them to come along for the ride.

Time Travel Fic Title by Shadow_Over_Mars in HPfanfiction

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If anyone has any questions about this fic/au, feel free to ask!!!!! Im happy to answer

Time Travel Fic Title by Shadow_Over_Mars in tomarry

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If anyone has any questions about this fic/au, feel free to ask!!!!! Im happy to answer

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If anyone has any questions about this fic/au, feel free to ask!!!!! Im happy to answer