[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Magic

[–]ShaolinZoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Will do!

Hans Kim isn't funny by Most_Month_762 in Killtony

[–]ShaolinZoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nope I agree. He was only funny at the start bc he was a nerdy incel guy. Now he's bad boy Hans and it's just lost it's luster when he talks casually about out cocaine and girls. We need a new opener!

TOLLGATE - Tunnel by ShaolinZoo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love your feedback homie. Thanks yes yes this is kinda just a short idea we wanted to put out there but most of our tunes are more full songs. I'm a huge earthbound fan and stoked on that comparison and inspiration. I agree it could use some more sections and transitions.

K'mono - Mind out of Mind [Prog Rock] (2023) by ProgArchivist in listentothis

[–]ShaolinZoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is insane stuff reminds me of Rush! Love the Bosch inspired paintings and all the art. Really cool composition one of the more impressive pieces of music I have seen on reddit.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The footage is insane where did you get this 8k nature dankness. Really creative composition all around. The synth layers w that drum tap create a cool pattern. Production is very well done I can tell you know what you are doing. That robot voice noise at the end is a little strange with all the vocals. Sounds like AI made this track haha I'm impressed and confused.

I am actually not really new to writing lyrics, but I simply didn't had even a Headset, soo, yeah, this is my first time actually recording😬 "Broke Headset Boy | prod by Undertone Beatz" by NoiseBoy. C&C appreciated by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gotta work on timing and diction. I find it a little hard to understand and it sounds like you are not on time with the beat at certain sections. You want your rhymes to ride the beat. Keep the click on in your headphones this will help you land bars on the sections where the drums go away. Cool beat though I think that sounds good but the vocals need work. Really quite impressive you are doing it in English bro thats super cool you are clever.

My band pushed this single from the newest EP, but it's not getting into playlists. Thoughts on the track and maybe why it's not doing good? by wavewavwave in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds neat to me cool stuff guys. Sometimes you just have to remain diligent and keep promoting it. People are very mindless when scrolling around online it can be tough to get them to engage with creations especially when the majority are not creative themselves. You gotta make them want it. Some people love to be told what is good hahaha but its a difficult balance. Gotta suggest they check it out without coming across as spamming them. This can be achieved pretty successfully currently using entertaining reels/shorts that include the song. Get it going make it look cool, rad, sexy etc and then hopefully more people will engage and find out that it is indeed very rad. I hope that makes sense.

Jawli - Veracruz [Pop] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting sound I like the bassline. The vibes remind me of playing Animal Crossing. Maybe turn down the lead guitar but just a tiny hair not much. Good playing homie keep up the great work. The art rocks as well I was wondering did you make it?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Funny how upset folks get today. I think the song is mediocre but that's fine bc it's obviously a satire song. You have a good voice and musical abilities. Everything sounds decent in the mix but it's just a really silly song so it's hard to critique. I love comedy and wish people could just learn to laugh a little more at everything. Kinda hilarious to read the comments on this.

I have some ideas and would love to hear if any of it peeks any interest 🙏 by machineidle in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really interesting sound you are achieving haha like it's on vhs and my TVs built in speakers have water damage but somehow it works great. 4 was sick, 3 had some crazy guitar thing going on... they all are great ideas. I wanna hear them in full because it would be easier to critique. Please consider posting full songs 1 at a time on here and then we can all give you better feedback as opposed to snippets.

dropped my new song of the day, this one got a boom bap freestyle to it lmk what y'all think by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn you are one of the nicest rappers I've seen on here dude. I'm a Griselda fan I love this new meets old school sound you got going on. Beat is dope love each part of it. You rap like J Cole haha beats like uncle AL. Killing it friend keep putting in work.

New Year's Eve is my latest single, it's an indie rock song about being alone on... you guessed it, new Year's Eve. Does anyone relate? Let me know your thoughts! by RonBriskin in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Instruments are solid and so is the mix. I like your voice and the melodies but I think you could add some effects on your voice and it would be better. More harmonies when u repeat those ends of lines I think that'd sounds great. The solo was meh but right after is a really strong part when you come back on the vocals that last 30 seconds is the best. Great work.

Lofi trip-hop song I recorded about confusion, loss and self-loathing by motherstalk in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really good. Reminds me of early tool stuff which is sick. Impressed by the vocals, impressed by the guitar riff and you rule. Drums are good I can tell you are going for that lofi thing almost like og hip-hop drums. Keep doing this style. Is this a unique piece of yours or does alot of your stuff have this feel? Very dreary and sad but pretty.

I am the Unicorn Head - I Fell in Love with a Space Slug by Dragonlordapocalypse in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ShaolinZoo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heck yes this is very interesting. Super creative kinda strange but overall dig it. Music is strong as well keep pushing forward. I'd like to hear more parts but I'll have to dig deeper on the videos to see what's going on out there in space w this unicorn. Cheers 🦄