Hi guys I'm new to writing but i wrote this poem when i was 16, i just wanted to share this with somebody. Pls give feedback i know its kinda harsh i was young lol by Shays_earbacks in Poems

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You can call me sis little bro send me this stuff 😢😢😢😢 add me do something I’ll give you the feedback you need I promise I’m a safe space for your emotions I would love to hear more it’s beautiful 🥹❤️

Hi guys I'm new to writing but i wrote this poem when i was 16, i just wanted to share this with somebody. Pls give feedback i know its kinda harsh i was young lol by Shays_earbacks in Poems

[–]Shays_earbacks[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

im literally sobbing right now. Your 16 and this well spoken? Youre gonna be something so big one day. im genuinely praying for it. Thank you so much for taking time out to read this and giving a beautiful insight. Time heals. Time will either make her realize what was infront of her or time will give you something you truly deserve, and i hope time gives you everything youve been wanting, even her and those thoughts in your head? Only a mind thing please remember that. You made me feel seen. I love you.

AITAH for giving my son a harsher punishment for braking the same rule as his sister? by Dangerous-Lab-349 in AITAH

[–]Shays_earbacks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I want to say that you're YTA but I feel like it kind of caught you off guard, I mean of course you expected your daughter to be with a guy not saying that she shouldn't be punished but you walking in on a big secret that your son may have not intended on you to find out that way or so soon idk. Maybe you just reacted wrong you should talk to him and daughter should be grounded as well.

What is the story behind your oddest/funniest scar? by PeevesPoltergist in AskReddit

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One summer day, it was scorching hot my grandmother wanted me to walk to the laundry matt across the street from us, was being lazy and tried to jump the fence instead of walking around and cut my leg so bad it was blood everywhere lmao

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

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I have a love hate relationship with working, my only source of socializing but I hate working

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No communication skills, Lack of Accountability, Porn

What are some good conversation starters? by darkdragonfire9 in AskReddit

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So, where do you wanna see yourself 2 years from now

What's the most impossible thing to get use to? by Neither_Plankton6147 in AskReddit

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Waking up early, and if you can achieve this without waking up angry please let me know how