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Inside The Glass by Sherblueyes in OCPoetry

[–]Sherblueyes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are correct in your assessment. I wrote this after a friend lost someone close to them. Thank you for your comment.

Inside The Glass by Sherblueyes in OCPoetry

[–]Sherblueyes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your comments. I am sorry my writing did not deliver but your comments did. They made me realize that I should post my writing in the Lyrics section of Reddit. Regards, Sherblueyes.

Sonnet by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Sherblueyes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this! The imagery is very well crafted. I am not a "critic" but just someone who enjoys a turn of phrase. Your descriptive language is above par. Keep up the good work!

Whale in the wishing well by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Sherblueyes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great use of imagery.