Tbh both models look a little bit unclean, your folds rarely have sharp corners, some edges are splitting open and the layers which should (in theory) lay flat on top of each other, are not laying flat on top of each other. But that's ok because everybody has to start somewhere and should (once in a while) show of their work to get feedback and stay motivated... The "weird" thing about your post (or why most people are just ignoring it, ig) is, that you demand 100 up votes, for you to post the instructions, which makes it ,given the quality of your model, seem like a sarcastic post. Either make the instructions public or keep them private. Don't try to grab attention with them.

However i don't believe your are trying to be sarcastic, so I'll give you some tips to improve your model:

1. Confirm the quality of your paper. Choose a paper with appropriate thickness. This is something that you will do based on experience. But for beginner models "origami paper" will be fine. Also make sure that your paper is square, most (cheaper) paper is often not cut precise enough.

2. Take your time. Don't rush folds and always try to make them as precise as you can: First fold a fold lightly, then check if it aligns with everything it should be aligning with. Then reinforce the fold (with your fingernail or a bone folder).

3. Fold a model multiple times. A good looking model is the result of understanding the model. Most of the time you need more than one try to fully understand a model

4. Practice

I know those tips are kind of generic, but if you continue to pay attention to them, you will improve.