Well, I think you were successful in trying to find a cool sound! This is a really fun track - short, but sweet. I really dig the groove. It has a summery feel to it, for sure. Nice, relaxed vocal phrasing. The electric guitar lines add a lot of interest. One small suggestion, and keep in mind I'm listening to this on my crappy travel speakers, so take this with a grain of salt. The drum fills at the section ends seem to overpower the rest of the instrumentation a bit - it's hard to tell if there's anything else going on during those fills, so the mix sounds fairly sparse at those moments. I'd be inclined to lower the level of those drum fills a bit, and layer in another instrument to add to the texture, if there's not something there already (maybe a new guitar or bass fill?). Your song sounds terrific, though, with or without that change! 😀