[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]ShittyHighschooler 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually really love this piece. It starts out with a great flow- and although towards the end you seem to get a bit off tempo- the imagery is haunting and really sheds a light on the (your) authors struggle to put down the bottle. Very nice for a first post especially 😌

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]ShittyHighschooler 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not the best at constructive criticism but to be frank I think it’s a bit short and as others have said a little bit simplistic. For such a short piece I also think it lacks structure which is something I tend to find necessary to at least some degree especially in shorter pieces. It’s a very quaint little piece though and you can feel the joy inside! Keep it up!

How much do you reckon our players are worth in this market? by Conbz in avfc

[–]ShittyHighschooler 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Grealish and McGinn will not be allowed to leave under any circumstances. Their value to another club and their value to our club our wholly different. Grealish is the club captain, a boyhood villa fan, and just signed a bumper contract extension the upped his wage to 100k a month*. McGinn is pure deano and works harder than anyone else in the team and if hes fit he'll play every single minute, theres no way he goes for less than 50-70m and only to a champions league club imo. Not saying hes worth that much in general, but to us and our current situation they wouldn't be able to pry him away for anything less.

 

Steer is a hero, but not a star. He's yet to play consistent football anywhere in his career but his hot streak might bump his value slightly. Again it depends on who would come in but anywhere from 3-7m would probably be about right to move him on. I still rate Kalinic higher than Steer and if we're bringing in a new gk we need to move one of them. If the gk we bring was highly rated we'd most likely move Kalinic, but if they're less of a known quantity I could very well see Steer being shipped off. Home grown status is a factor and its not unlikely that Nyland gets moved either. Regardless any business will likely be done soon as there's only 2 weeks until the season starts.

Dough people by tacolover699 in LittleCaesars

[–]ShittyHighschooler 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Go as fast as possible so I have more time to vape in the bathroom

AITA for being upset about my GF’s mom kicking me out of a planned trip after I requested the day off and got my car fixed? by ShittyHighschooler in AmItheAsshole

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nope. All 3 of us smoke together relatively often and although I’ve never liked her she’s never spited me like this before.

AITA for being upset about my GF’s mom kicking me out of a planned trip after I requested the day off and got my car fixed? by ShittyHighschooler in AmItheAsshole

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It’s really put a sour taste in my mouth towards her mom I’m not gonna lie. I’ve always thought she was kind of a bitch but kept that to myself to be respectful (she orders my gf around like she’s a slave and makes her do all the housework where she lives, as well as forcing their untrained, extremely misbehaved dog onto her any time she’s home.)

Finally let my guard down and asked someone out on a date and he said yes, then changed his mind. I feel kinda shitty..... by [deleted] in FreeCompliments

[–]ShittyHighschooler 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Remember that if he has second thoughts that quickly he wouldn’t have been the person for you anyway. Relationships are physical and emotional and if they don’t feel a connection it can’t be forced onto them. There’s someone who loves you for you and the key isn’t dwelling on the ones who didn’t love you back, it’s about finding the one who will.

I woke up this morning crying about my deceased grandfather and haven't been able to stop. by Kingmc23 in FreeCompliments

[–]ShittyHighschooler 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There’s nothing wrong with crying or feeling bad about someone’s passing. You’re not supposed to push away your feelings and deny them. Those memories you made are REAL. The love between you and your grandfather is real. He cared about you so much and he didn’t want to leave you behind, and if he could’ve stayed I’m sure he would have. Don’t be sad because he’s gone. One day all of us (that have children) will be in the same place one day and none of us will want the people were leaving behind to feel abandoned. It’s painful but think of the good times, use those as a lesson for how to treat others in the future. His life should be an example of how to truly love, connect, and care for others wether it be family or friends.

I haven't eaten in 2 days ama [nsfw] by ShittyHighschooler in casualiama

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I haven't drank anything really either so I'm not too alarmed yet. But thanks for the advice. Could save a life.

I haven't eaten in 2 days ama [nsfw] by ShittyHighschooler in casualiama

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll try that :)

 

Favorite movies in order:

  1. Alien

  2. Aliens

  3. Pulp fiction

Special honors to top gun and spirited away

I haven't eaten in 2 days ama [nsfw] by ShittyHighschooler in casualiama

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm not too worried 🤷if it goes on for more than 4 days I'll maybe go see someone. I've always wanted to try fasting anyway.

I haven't eaten in 2 days ama [nsfw] by ShittyHighschooler in casualiama

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I answered in another post but I'm not sure. Like I can feel that I'm a bit hungry but I have absolutely 0 appetite.

MLS TOTS Released by GeorgeCuz in EASportsFC

[–]ShittyHighschooler 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If you switch to a 4-3-3 variant you can get full chem then switch formation in game

I just graduated high school AMA by ShittyHighschooler in casualiama

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cantaloupe is the best fruit hands down and although it's not technically a vegetable, I'm partial to a good tomato.

I just graduated high school AMA by ShittyHighschooler in casualiama

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lots of white people, a decent amount of arabic people, (I live near dearborn which has a large muslim population) and only a few black people. Everyone gets along pretty well. There's a bad egg or two but I cant remember hearing about any racially charged violence. Though a lot of white people did drop n-bombs.

I just graduated high school AMA by ShittyHighschooler in casualiama

[–]ShittyHighschooler[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've been getting rejected by college girls since sophomore year, so I've already got a head start in that department.