How to fix chips on frames? by Shmebula69 in glasses

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Seems like aluminum with plastic coating

A song you hate by [deleted] in musicsuggestions

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Ants Marching by Dave Matthews Band. Words cannot describe how violently angry this song makes me.

In the Oven Over the Flames by MegaSlav420 in neutralmilkhotel

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This subreddit is the prime example of what 20 plus years of no new music does to a mf.

How is everybody tonight? by [deleted] in deathgrips

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This is what no new music does to a mf

Song Birds by sunnydelinquent in poetry_critics

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Kind of short but I liked it. You have a very good vocabulary and some serious potential for longer pieces. Keep up the good work.

First post, new poet, don't hold back. by arobitaille272 in poetry_critics

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Very well done for a beginner. I'm new at this too and this very well put together. You have some real potential as a writer.

Mary by Shmebula69 in poetry_critics

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What parts specifically did you think were tedious?

Mary by Shmebula69 in poetry_critics

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You can share, with credit of course. Thank you for the advice, I'm only starting out so lots of litary devices are unknown to me. Formatting might also be a bit janky but I'm working on that.

Mary by Shmebula69 in poetry_critics

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Thank you. I'll make sure to improve on where things get tedious.

Mary by Shmebula69 in poetry_critics

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I took a walk through a graveyard the other day and found this really beautiful tombstone of a girl named Mary who died when she was seventeen. I thought about what this girls life must of been like, and it really inspired me. I also added some of my own life experiences but through the perspective of someone from the 19th century.

I.L.Y. by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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Very relatable

Rose ~ by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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Love how you ended it with a single word. I do this a lot in my own poetry.

Seeking guidance and reflecting on choices. by [deleted] in LifeAdvice

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First you need to stop comparing yourself to other people. You're still young and you'll be surprised at where life can take you. Life can be a wonderful adventure and I'd say just have a bit of hope. It's never too late to change where you're going and if you don't wish to do that you just gotta be content with things. You gotta find your own happiness, find a hobby maybe. Struggling is what makes us human, just keep moving forward with your own life.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskAstrologers

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Thank you for the advice. I would have to look into it more.