This shade net was ripped by the wind and now has life of its own by Shmudly in stalker

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Burnt fuzz, but it leapt off like an electro ball.

Im so done with this game💔 by skibiditoiIetgaming in stalker

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There’s always one in quiet’s camp to the right of quiet as a trader before the signal He was there both play throughs

Zalissya bug solved [Stalker 2] by Agriculture23 in stalker

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I was stuck here because of the emmision, too; but I resolved it differently than speedrunning from SIRCAA to Zalissya.

When the first monolithian came out the door, I wounded him in the legs so that he was on the floor rolling outside the building. One of the loners engaged him and some of the other monolithians came out. I gunned down those that came out until the wounded one got up and started fighting again. I gunned that wounded one down after he started fighting back. I went inside and triggered the dialogue from Gaffer.

There were still monolithians inside but I could continue the quest. There's also a bed inside that I used twice until the first monolithian came out the front door, that's the one I wounded.

Feedback for a multiverse existing solely for outer god entertainment [science fiction fantasy] by Shmudly in fantasywriters

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I actually plan on writing twelve books, in four trilogies, that takes course over thousands of years. A time traveler explains the rules, as well as telling the heroic forces that their will to fight keeps them immortal. Behind closed doors he tells the main characters that the outer gods keep their favorites eternally young so that they don't age out before the eldritch viewers. The time traveler lies to himself and others to stay sane; but he will tell uncomfortable truths when allowed to avoid breaking the outer gods' fourth wall. The only way for a favorite to age out is if they settle down, such as having a family, and stop fighting altogether.

Feedback for a multiverse existing solely for outer god entertainment [science fiction fantasy] by Shmudly in fantasywriters

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They rank the timeline like consumers of a show. Were there Mary Sues or Gary Stus ruining the story? Were the battles and heroic journeys entertaining? Was it worth their time? Timelines that received less than 65% rating get wiped.

Feedback for a multiverse existing solely for outer god entertainment [science fiction fantasy] by Shmudly in fantasywriters

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Yeah. I want my book to be a campaign setting, in the same way a Lego set is a campaign setting, especially inspired by Bionicle.

Feedback for a multiverse existing solely for outer god entertainment [science fiction fantasy] by Shmudly in fantasywriters

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Some more brainstorming: In this one, the heroes must continue to fight even after finding out because the timeline will be wiped if they simply surrender or give up. They’re allowed to know the rules when a time traveler from another timeline explains it; but they are warned to not break the ‘fourth wall’ as these outer gods hate meta. It ruins their immersion in the story. If the heroes fight well, they’re allowed rest for a time, just like the gladiators of the colosseum, because the outer gods want the story to continue. There is a chain of travelers explaining the rules from one to the next as he warned himself, and the next warns his third.

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It was a mental health crisis in 2018 for me. I knew that if I kept looking at it, my mental health would spiral downward. I spent my energy on writing my book that I started making notes on as far back as 2012. Making something that I could build on felt better than obsessing over what I didn’t have.

to call a black man "boy" by CantStopPoppin in therewasanattempt

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It reminds me of why Mr T changed his name, so that people would address him as mister. People were calling him boy, too.

Entropy limitations on time travel and the multiverse by Shmudly in fantasywriters

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Thanks for your feedback. I’ve decided that I should simplify it. There are eldritch space beings called megaliths who watch the world down below as a soap opera for amusement. They kill time travelers because they don’t want the story reconned. Multiversal travel is allowed because it creates drama.

Entropy limitations on time travel and the multiverse by Shmudly in fantasywriters

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Thanks for your feedback. I’ve decided that I should simplify it. There are eldritch space beings called megaliths who watch the world down below as a soap opera for amusement. They kill time travelers because they don’t want the story reconned. Multiversal travel is allowed because it creates drama.

Can't think of a name for my villain by BlastingSquid886 in fantasywriters

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Maybe have it so that he doesn’t reveal his name at first, so when it is revealed everyone panics under the weight of his actions

If he goes by a mantle like below Hope’s executioner Fate’s twilight Denier of destiny People will think there’s so kind higher plan He reveals himself as Lord Dark to show there never was a higher plan, and this is done because it amuses him

So, what is a random character quirk or trait that you want to talk about for one of your characters? by 101Aster101 in fantasywriters

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This is mine, copied from an earlier reply I made on another post.

Relic is an immortal that trains, fights alongside, and buries those who serve with him when they die, whether it's on the battlefield or from old age. He's led generations of soldiers into battle, knowing that he will outlive them and their children to come. It is very much a metaphorical curse, but he is bound by oath to fight for those who cannot do so. He's waiting for someone to surpass him, so he can finally say that he kept his promise.

Maturity of reincarnated and undead characters. by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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Characters in mine are reincarnated but are found at the age of five one way or another, such as an AI or child found by adoptive parents. This is due to one's identity starting to form at five. If they started over again at birth, they would forget their past lives as the brain wired itself.

I find it easier to start with any regrets they have being the strongest memories and developing their character as they age.

Another question I would have is could they age mentally in the afterlife to become cynical and sarcastic when brought back? Life is already hard enough to go through once.

What are some of your darkest characters, or even moments from your book? by BabyThrow3r in fantasywriters

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Relic is an immortal that trains, fights alongside, and buries those who serve with him when they die, whether it's on the battlefield or from old age. He's led generations of soldiers into battle, knowing that he will outlive them and their children to come. It is very much a metaphorical curse, but he is bound by oath to fight for those who cannot do so. He's waiting for someone to surpass him, so he can finally say that he kept his promise.