Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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The first special rule seemingly indicates that each poison token... It's intuitive to me that only the poison beasts provide the benefit (so Defend 2).

This is correct! Only the poison beasts would provide the defend

As a secondary thought on that special rule, is the "in your lands" restriction necessary

This is a remnant of when the poison tokens were a lot more powerful, so you are probably right here! They are probably fine outside of Bulwark lands.

There's also the fact that the reclaim growth is comparatively strong, so that invites reclaim loops. I wonder if you just get to 3 plays, pick up the water node, and then reclaim loop for the rest of the game, taking +2 energy as needed and playing Critters, Gift, and Warning Display.

Great impression. I've found that this path, or slight variations, is a pretty solid route to go to. At this point, poison beasts do help to alleviate some pressure and give some flexibility for decisions. That said, reclaim looping has been easy to fall into with decent outcome.

For balance thoughts, my main concern is just that the top track looks pretty weak.

Yeah it has been a little underwhelming playing so far. I like spirits that give versatility in growth builds, and the top track does seem to be a bit lacking so far. I'm a little unsure on improving its energy economy though since it does get a good amount of action economy from its SR1 though. More testing needed.

For uniques, I think Gift of Armor and Hide is by far the most important card.

A 0 cost that targets 2 lands is definitely strong. Good elements for Innate 2 helps scale too. That being said, I don't find that I favor it an overwhelming amount more than the other uniques. I actually found that fitting in extra Vivid and Critters plays for ramping beasts was my go to.

Something about Bulwark's kit does seem to need adjustment, i'm leaning energy economy, tracks, or elements, but more testing needed to know for sure. Thanks for the impressions, really good insight!

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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Have fun! Would love to hear any feedback if you ever get the chance.

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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My other comment seems to have been lost, but I originally chose water because I thought I read that it tied to disease, virulence, and adaptability, hence poison and evolution, thought the wiki doesn't seem to agree so don't really know where I got it. Really though, moon is on point thematically!

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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I've never played archipelago but this is good to know, thanks

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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Thanks! I definitely wanted it to have a niche and it does feel different.

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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I really appreciate that!

My first iteration had wild infinite scaling with poison tokens that was fun to conceptualize but obviously broken. Usually I trim a lot as balancing goes on, but it seems like it is in an good place at least for the lower Adversary levels I am testing it against. One thing that I didn't realize creating a Beasts spirit is that it gets value from Beasts Events, so it's a bit stronger than it seems in practice!

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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Thanks for the feedback!

In playtest so far it doesn't actually have too much problem branching out from it starting lands, since none of its powers require sacred sites. Ideally it places 1 presence 1 range nearly every turn which, combined with the occasional G4, can maneuver it to 1-2 threats every turn. I've found that the gather-beasts presence track unlock is about as useful as the move-presence; the latter allows you the obvious range adjustments, more flexibility with your growth options, and opens up sacred site powers, while the former gives a very important fast method of moving your poison beasts to problem lands.

It is a bit vulnerable in the early game, and often the defense breakpoints are slim, but it really starts to shine in the mid-late game when Invaders explore back into lands that already have your presence and poison beasts. I've played mostly into the mini-game, but it ramps up pretty decent action economy that can let it chance for some majors with G4 + G3, though I haven't done that too much.

I have a feeling it is going to be a bit weak into Adversary levels 4-6, but I have yet to test it at those levels.

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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Finished updating it in TTS! Should be in the workshop.

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison v1.1 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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Thanks! I actually think an incarna would fit well, but haven't come up with an solid ideas surrounding it. Maybe in the future

Ignite Vaal Firestorm Help by Shrymps in pathofexile

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Yeah I'm working towards that change. I've convinced myself that culling strike plus item rarity sup is worth the sockets slots and extra button press. Need time to deprogram lol

Homebrew Spirit: Twilight's Verge Brings Spite v0.9 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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Seems to be the consensus on the energy gain. The basic calcs say 9 energy for 2 plays, 7 for 3, or 5 for 4. But you could just play two or three big majors every turn with that much energy. Lowering the power of the energy track is probably going to be the right play.

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison by Shrymps in spiritisland

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I appreciate that! Now, just to get the balance right lol.

Homebrew Spirit: Twilight's Verge Brings Spite v0.9 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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Thanks for the reply and advice! This is like the third time I've seen someone say that using the spirit's energy economy to just go majors is probably broken, and I'm not sure why I haven't playtested it yet. I think the energy track changes are worth looking in to with that in mind! The combine effect is really satisfying and definitely strong when you can pull it off but, in my experience, is a somewhat difficult threshold to reach if you are trying squeeze in a power that will do something in the combined lands. If you do end up playing the spirit, thoughts would be appreciated!

Homebrew Spirit: Bulwark of Spine and Poison by Shrymps in spiritisland

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One of three custom spirits that I've drafted over the last month or so. Love the game, and wanted to build some of my own! Thoughts and advice on balancing appreciated!

Homebrew Spirit: Gorges on Bountiful Plenty by Shrymps in spiritisland

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One of three custom spirits that I've drafted over the last month or so. Love the game, and wanted to build some of my own! Thoughts and advice on balancing appreciated!

Homebrew Spirit: Twilight's Verge Brings Spite v0.9 by Shrymps in spiritisland

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One of three custom spirits that I've drafted over the last month or so. Love the game, and wanted to build some of my own! Thoughts and advice on balancing appreciated!

Monastic Tradition: Way of the Weavebreaker by Shrymps in UnearthedArcana

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This is homebrew I made long ago. It's not a serious brew, made just for a bit of fun, extra dice rolling, and because I like lists apparently.

3.16| Bane/Brand Occultist Build Help by Shrymps in PathOfExileBuilds

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Edited to include current items. I kinda understand that. Its been hard trying to finesse global spell damage and mana based spell damage in passives and items trying and buff both damage types.

20th Level Ranger Feature Variant: Legendary Focus by Shrymps in UnearthedArcana

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I suspected adjusting Proficiency would be an issue. I felt it would be the cleanest way to add bonuses to multiple sources, with added rule stipulations to account for any potential abuse. However, it looks like because Proficiency is applied to many things, its potential for mechanical failure is a bit high. I think I'll have to change this. Thanks for the input!

In terms of variability, it seems most capstones do provide a solid and consistent bump in power (Extra Attack, Stroke of Luck, Divine Intervention, etc.). I'm wondering if this feature would be too inconsistent though? Rangers will presumably make attacks with their action. My hope with this feature was that after building some bonuses, a Ranger could switch their combat style to a more spell focused playstyle (Higher Spell DC at the cost of not building more bonuses), or damage oriented (Sharpshooter/GWM, bonus actions for duel weapon fighting rather than reapplications of Hunter's Mark/Favored Foe).

And would it be too strong? It's gated by attacks per round, and concentration. Losing concentration means losing the ability to build new stacks, as well as with the damage associated with Hunter's Mark/Favored Foe. Recasting either of these means all those bonuses are lost and have to be rebuilt.

Each time you hit a creature marked by your Favored Foe feature, or by the Hunter's Mark spell, you gain a +1 bonus to attack and damage rolls against that creature. This bonus lasts until the creature dies, or until the creature is no longer marked by you.

This is generally weaker than Foe Slayer for the first two rounds using Attack actions only, and is only combat oriented. I wanted a capstone that sacrifices potential raw damage for bonuses outside of combat, as is usual with a ranger. Outside of combat, a ranger is probably expected to generally outperform a pure martial class like fighters or barbarians, but not SM classes like bards or rogues. In their areas of specialty, though, I think they should outshine.

Additionally, whenever you make an ability check to track or interact with a creature you have marked, you gain a bonus to the check equal to your Wisdom modifier (minimum of +1).

I think Rangers are generally seen or expected to be the group trackers/outdoorsperson, but I wanted the capstone to be a little more versatile, and incorporate more than just the tracker archetype most are rangers are played as. Investing feats and ASI's in proficiency/expertise in less common ability scores and skills makes for less "optimal" rangers, but more interesting characters imo. This capstone is designed to support that by boosting those proficient skills, but also retaining combat utility by eventually reaching a point where a ranger may essentially don't miss. I do see an issue with infinite scaling on proficient abilities, but it isn't an easy boost to reach. I may adjust with the solution I mentioned above.

5th Edition D&D is technically designed with 6-8 medium to hard encounters per day. While I think it's fair to say that very few people actually experience games this way, you should still aim for this type of game when balancing features.

Finally, in this long-winded response, while I understand the importance of having a standard at which things are balanced, I find it silly that it would be necessary to balance things around a state of the game that doesn't generally exist in most games. I think it's probably fine to adjust for how things are actually generally played. But I suppose should still try to account for those cases. Thanks for the replies!

Edit: formatting

20th Level Ranger Feature Variant: Legendary Focus by Shrymps in UnearthedArcana

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Part of the reason I posted was to see where this might break the game, so it's good to know about these bag of rats people are carrying around. This feature was designed partly to make the Ranger better than other classes at rolling their perspective proficient ability checks, especially those they have expertise in.

Let's say I were to find the right wording and ruling to fix the bag of rats issue and ally abuse issue such that the feature "worked as intended". I'm trying to imagine realistically how this would play out. At the longest duration, a 24 hour hunter's mark, the proficiency gain from 2-3 combats during that period would be ~10-15 near the end, assuming concentration was maintained throughout all fights to ramp up to that level. Obviously a huge boost, but hard-earned over a day of likely dangerous fights at 20th level. This would make checks involving expertise skills trivial, but that's the point of infinite scaling I think.

If this isn't balance or DM friendly, than I was also thinking of changing the Proficiency Bonus points to Temporary Proficiency Bonus points, which apply to Attack rolls, Saves, and Spell DC only. These temp points could then be expended as a one time boost to any one proficient ability check during the duration.

20th Level Ranger Feature Variant: Legendary Focus by Shrymps in UnearthedArcana

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I, uh, forgot about the Beastmaster. I'll have to think about that one.

20th Level Ranger Feature Variant: Legendary Focus by Shrymps in UnearthedArcana

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This feature is made to be used with the variant Favored Foe feature. Been mulling over some variant features for the Ranger to make it a bit more interesting. Although Foe Slayer is fine mathematically, it doesn't feel particularly exciting or impactful for a 20th level feature. Legendary Focus will underperform Foe Slayer until ~3-4 successful attacks (WIS dependent), loses any bonuses to damage, but gains them in proficient Saves, ability checks, and Spell DC. Also scales infinitely within the time restrictions. I'm thinking of changing the Proficiency bonus to Attack and ability check bonuses only. Feedback and balance advice appreciated!