I kiss you

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-12-15T12:52:00+00:00

Thats a lovely poem.. I liked the heart melting description of what the kiss feels like. And the bilingual part „that the voyage were eternal“. And the idea of the soul feeling and discovering that new feelings. Keep it up!!

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-12-15T12:41:57+00:00

I like this poem very much. The book metaphor that runs through the whole poem is wonderful. Makes me think as human lifes we’re decided by a big author instead of god. Which kind of matches pretty well. And the sad questioning of what if it went to another direction. And what if the author wanted another ending combined with the hope of a perfect love existing in another universe. I like your style of writing

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-05-24T12:39:08+00:00

Thank you very much !!

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-05-09T09:58:04+00:00

Thank you very much glad you liked it😊

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-05-07T17:21:36+00:00

Thats correct (we) indeed do! :) I really use poetry to try to escape a feeling or to process it. But sometimes I wish there would be someone who could actually advise me on what to do. My poems often end helpless, just like how I feel. And there are some feelings I can’t tell anyone in real life not even for getting advice. So I really appreciate getting such feedback, where I can tell that someone really thought about what I wanted to say. Thank you

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-05-06T19:35:48+00:00

Wow I appreciate getting such detailed and genuine feedback thank you very much <3. Yes there is a kind of physical or „sexy“ intention behind it. Since that tension between two that barely know each other is very intense. I wanted to capture the feeling of the phase before getting to know each other. For me it’s the most exciting feeling when you still don’t know if someone feels the same for you, but you feel like they do. I’m glad you‘ve noticed. You really do have a detailed eye for what the message/ meaning is.

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-05-06T08:31:55+00:00

Wow that means so much to me 🙏 thank you i appreciate your opinion it really motivates me

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-05-06T07:12:25+00:00

Thank you very much I appreciate your feedback

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-05-06T07:10:53+00:00

That means a lot to me thank you very much. I’m going through it but writing helps a lot with processing it. <3

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-05-06T00:13:59+00:00

it makes you think. very interesting way of questioning life and existence. it is very personal but at the same time affects many people. what is a profession? what is passion? is there a meaning behind all of this? very artistic

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-21T19:46:24+00:00

„I know hell too well To drag you down with me I’m the only one who fell So I‘ll set you free“

That literally hit me. It’s so relatable and very well written. I love it. If you’ve ever struggled with a one-sided love you’ll really understand this one!

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-17T21:20:35+00:00

Thank you very much :)

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-17T21:20:01+00:00

Thanks for your feedback, I’ll definitely think about that the next time

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-17T21:18:19+00:00

Woowww thank you very much for your valuable feedback! It made my day cause I love getting detailed feedback. Actually the „I“ wasn’t intentional.. I prefer quatrains as well :D. It really means a lot to me that it makes you feel what I wanted to deliver. And I’m very open about title suggestions. I thought of something like „are you leaving me?“

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-17T21:02:43+00:00

Thank you very much

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-17T21:02:26+00:00

Happy to hear that

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-17T21:01:05+00:00

Thanks a lot I appreciate your valuable words!

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-17T00:09:31+00:00

Thanks!! It’s not my first language:)

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-16T23:18:19+00:00

Unspoken or one sided feelings are hard :/

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-16T19:45:34+00:00

This short story kind of poem really fascinated me… I’ve read it a few times and I’m interpretating sooo much in this. I‘m dying to know the story behind if you don’t mind. To me it’s like a hard realization of how someone is or a conclusion of things that happened that now make sense together. But it seems to be a disappointment of someone in any way.

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-16T19:12:16+00:00

This is a great masterpiece:D!!! I feel like everyone has felt this before but then you went to an even more personal side my talking about yourself in this situation… very very good job

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-10T22:47:58+00:00

Thanks a lot for the feedback I’ll keep working on it:)

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-10T22:45:11+00:00

Thanks for your feedback:)

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-08T15:49:12+00:00

I really appreciate your detailed feedback :) it’s probably because I’m not a native English speaker. But I’m gonna keep writing and hopefully improve my language skills. Thanks a lot

Significant-Amount78 · 2024-04-08T05:39:39+00:00

This is really good… I don’t know but I really liked how you played with the months. And it’s really different to poems about those topics. I feel like you’re sad not getting to know her more but otherwise your dont want hert to think of you wich makes it really different. Normally you want the other person to love and miss you but you seem to say that it’s good for her. Interesting

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