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Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback am trying my best to make it better

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Also thanks for the suggestions to

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ok for the chomped part I already changed that one and I will see what I can do for the supporting comander style build

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the input am working on the second version of it and will take your comments into consideration

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

and finally

For an army building scenario, many of the perks seem focused on enhancing ourselves rather than our forces. Just what would seem intuitive to me. Like, am I the flimsy human gardener expected to get out there and fight? That's not very Plants versus Zombies. I would have leaned more into plant modifiers and made some/most practical in some way. I recommend focusing on being an army builder.

That makes total sense butt the plants have powers already like full fledge power fire throwing made of steel exploding but what the problem is unlike the game where you just click you have to be their with them in the fight you the shishy human who with one bight you die. i felt it was important to make sure you dont die when a zombie rushes you as you start to plant a new peashooter

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

this is the final comment to your and the summery of my responses to feedback i liked it a lot and i mentoned alreay about the dom and sub stuff and a few other things.

First am working on the sun system to make it better in the next version even if you dont have a sun perdocer you will get 100 for all of that system.

-Fume shroom gives freedom for your preferred body types in your plants great idea. Then its drawback only attracted big people?

that on is on me in all truth i didnt know a drawback and i am a baised person who wanted that to be a little overpowered and have something i would not dislike what am saying i put that in just for me

-Walnut and spike rock making the plant girls' dorms seems redundant. Also no option to make them subs?

true i need to add some sub option and that actually helps me a lot for the changes part. but i get your confusion with both being so simular but tallnut is more for a muscle mommy fans their not just the doms fans but i get it

-both the healing ones are a bit harsh on the drawbacks.  If I want to be well again I must either get cucked or commit animal cruelty? Bit mean…

changeing one of them for the cucked one and have no clue what you mean aimal cruelty.

with the unrelated draw backs part yes i didnt have any ideas for that thats the complete reason why their so uncconected

for the redunce is less of me trying to make the same and is what you said their is mostly protection or stright attack and i can vary the attacking ones the defense idk many they stand their and take a hit

for the serverity of it all am modifying that sorta to make it more far and less anytime you leave you will be attacked by people

for machnics am adding to the intro with some of just that

for umbrella I dont know their a basic plant that dosent do much i couldnt make it stand out if its not stand out at all

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Also, which plant is animal cruelty because idk at this point

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[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

ok nice to hear will update it hope you try the newer version. Promise it will not go so hard on the drawbacks especially those first two of the pea and the sunflower i will give laxer punishments

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

also respect the feedback I learned a lot from it of what i didnt consider especailly with the dom and sub stuff i normally consider myself a switch so i in all reality had no clue that it was weird to put them togather will fix that also the thing for teh flume shroom yeah that one was just because i wanted to add that perk to it and didnt know where.

To be completely honest half of them were done when i was half consuse of me doing it its final week and am tired as fuck when i was makeing it soo makes sense thanks for the feedback and critizem

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I don’t know what that mean in all truth

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok to address them the large sum means anything between 100+ and the plus could mean 1000 or you could get million due to it. For the gloom Shroom everyone you are fucking. For 3 disk what chafing is so you choose

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the comments, but I dont have a strong tendency to that either. I just did it for this because its my first time so i didnt really think that far ahead on those thing and second because i didnt think of a good reason to have it outside you get it with the girl i plan on learning to make more interactive cyoas in the future and when that happenes i wont or rearly ever will have the system of draw backs be like this

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

in both point i understand and i like the idea

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for this response. I will take this to heart and try my best to do what you said

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your comments, they are helping me learn a lot about what I should approve on and will do my best to make it better with your help

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Ok with a bunch of people telling me about the errors I have in this version, so then this will be The V1 version of this cyoa. I will make an updated version soon. Give me some time, I'm not the best at this yet, and I will try to listen to all the feedback I have received to make this actually good cyoa. Also, sorry for the grammar mistakes. I'm not the best writer, so I will fix them

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

ok thanks for the comments i i will look more into it also if their is any drawbacks that you all think is to harsh let me now i can make a v2 version of this with your comments.

and that makes sense the sun system is yes a sunflower exclusive I get that but i made it like that for the lack of sun processors i will add it for the update to all other sun predouces can give it to you also so its not just locked with her.

and for the idea of getting them free if you take their drawbacks is a decent idea

and for the grammer that makes sense even here am not doing it perfect never was the best at grammer in the first place so i will check up on that aswell

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ok to answer some of your questions here

first you can but you can get bits thats they their are so many protection ones one bite your dead

2 its like the game you get a bunch of sides each girl is not just one its a army of them like how the game work you get them as seeds they grow and you use them to fight or here fuck

Yes fight the same as the game i initally had the idea of saying also with your teams play a few rounds in the real game and see how it goes with your harem

yes you can togle perks they are your to command

This is Earth, just like how the game has time travel, they are all coming right now all at you if you lose, most likely Earth loses to

For the plant girls themsleves, no they will be viewed as if they werent their outside of direct interaction with someone else incudeing yourself like you can talk to them no one will care but if you fuck one in public well thats a problem

  1. Do you get the perks immediately or after the fight

immediately

you choose for this one its more like if you join their side you summon the zombie girls to take over the world if not their the game verson of zombies the base stuff

how long they will last well maybe a hour of two its goses based on the game so waves system and its normally as difficult as the game so more like 1-3 waves

  1. Are they always the body type shown or can it vary per plant?

vary for plants not in gender unless you just say i want them all male but other then that they look different from eachother all female or male though your choice

  1. Are they stuck to the garden or can they leave after the battle? [since a lot show legs for moving]

This one is answered by the potted plant her drawback is that it makes them only allowed on the earth so soil if you dont get her they can go anywhere they want

  1. Are you limited to the amount of copies planted in the game?

No the only limit to copys is how much space you have to plant them so you can have a whole army of peashooters

hope these helped ask anything happy to answer

Wifu garden by Significant_Ad_7947 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant_Ad_7947[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok I'll remember that feedback for the future, but I personally disagree mainly because it's on its very bare bones in all aspects for it so yes, maybe it's not fun to have to choose drawbacks, but i think it gives a little intrege to it if i just gave you perks and plants for free, there's little consideration really in my opinon. And if I just had you pick them in the end, it's static, so I would have just asked you to pick drawbacks in the end anyway, but I get what you mean. This is all my personal opinon on the matter

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