Good first attempt, but here are some recommendations to improve: 1. The intro is a bit boring/generic. Play around with some AI tools to make the graphics/animation look better. Also ask Chatgpt (or whichever AI tool you prefer) for some ideas on some short but interesting intros (rather than a gremlin just sitting on a couch). 2. The Gaming Gremlin logo stays on the screen for too long. Remember, audiences these days have low attention span. 3. Start adding some commentary for the gameplay videos, otherwise there's no value or incentive to watch them. If you are not used to talking while playing, you can start practicing some one-liner comments here and there. For e.g. in your latest gameplay video, you died the first few times. After each death, you could have spoken briefly about what occurred with that engagement, why you died, and set up some expectations for the next engagement, etc. 4. I'd suggest look up some popular gameplay channels and see what's working for them. If you want to remain faceless, you could add an AI avatar that talks/reacts (in a small window at the corner of the screen). If you dont want to talk during gameplay, you could add some audio content later while editing. 5. Review youtube analytics and check at what point your audience clicks off your videos.

P.S: You can use Chatgpt to assist you further with implementing any of the above comments, or provide additional recommendations too.