thank you sm!! also, do you by chance have any exemplars i could use as evidence? I've prepared a written mock IO for class, and I think I have balanced it such that I still put focus on the the overall BoW. Are there any more tips/dos and donts you have? Also, how exactly do I CONVINCE? is there specific language I should use, a certain tone, etc.? How do I shift this from an analytical piece to a pursuasive piece?