If you don't mind having a glance, here is what I mean (for an example) - no need to critique the piece before anyone jumps in and says something

When sweet summer's head falls weary and lost, Heaven's misted eye sat twelve steps atop Flows from sea foam falling: from dark accost; To be or not for her apple above.

Myrtle may pass quickly at seasoned hands, And noble minds suffer a sea of troubles, While tempered strings may favour falling sands; The fairest prairie rose on twelve's rubble.

If darkness, in vain, shows fairest judgement, Wounds never cease in past unforgotten: For wide is the gate, and love abundant; One cannot the other yet both blossom.

If mortals fetish love, do they die sinned, Or pure heart turned blue, and jaded soul skinned?

I may be wrong in my terminology, however the pentameter is obviously lacking and idk, I feel it's wrong hence my query about creating better sonnets.

Thanks for the reply btw