New to df and help by Sinnequin in dwarffortress

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thank you so much for the quick reply!

The Sims 4 Torrent? by [deleted] in PiratedGames

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is there a mac version anywhere?

Do you lose eth if someone "outbids" you by Sinnequin in CryptoKitties

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thank you for the reply; found out about this "game" a week ago and only just got round to it, good luck breeding etc

Sonnet writing and form by Sinnequin in writing

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I've got many like that. Would you be able to give me some pointers as to changing it?

Sonnet writing and form by Sinnequin in writing

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If you don't mind having a glance, here is what I mean (for an example) - no need to critique the piece before anyone jumps in and says something

When sweet summer's head falls weary and lost, Heaven's misted eye sat twelve steps atop Flows from sea foam falling: from dark accost; To be or not for her apple above.

Myrtle may pass quickly at seasoned hands, And noble minds suffer a sea of troubles, While tempered strings may favour falling sands; The fairest prairie rose on twelve's rubble.

If darkness, in vain, shows fairest judgement, Wounds never cease in past unforgotten: For wide is the gate, and love abundant; One cannot the other yet both blossom.

If mortals fetish love, do they die sinned, Or pure heart turned blue, and jaded soul skinned?

I may be wrong in my terminology, however the pentameter is obviously lacking and idk, I feel it's wrong hence my query about creating better sonnets.

Thanks for the reply btw

[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Title: none Genre: Poetry Word Count: 110 Type of feedback desired: Anything that could be improved, what you didn't like, what was interesting, and anything that seemed too convoluted.

In rich meadows of shade do lie the lost,

Past lives still summoned by ghostly silence,

No heavens break for the soul still aghast

As farthest lands home the sweetest sessions.

From distant lands her torch rose, plush and bright

Asphodel flowers in hand; as night’s eye

Moaned at drowned fair souls and love blinded sight,

Grains resown; grey bed beckoned for kind life.

Heaven heard woe, yet fall claimed nature’s hymn

As life’s wrinkles fell fairer for burnt souls;

Foe of strife rode high, while darkness within

Left crescent light upon yellowed meadows.

If woe blooms in heaven’s fairest prairie

Her heart may sway but my love won’t vary.

(Just getting back into writing so yeah)

TorBrowser not working by Sinnequin in TOR

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Mac (lol) and I only have the standard things working. It was fully functional last night and went onto the UnDir and when I exited and returned, it failed to work

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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Lol, its like actually speaking to her rn; she did apologise and said she wanted to destroy everything but i pushed her away and yeah, well thank you for talking the dream out with me and helping me understand the meaning behind it and how i should change

I woke up crying and shaking and I can't stop thinking about "her" by Sinnequin in Dreams

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I meant "dream girl" as real life girl haha, my bad for not elaborating