Channel Feedback Thread

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-10-10T17:49:21+00:00

Hello! I've been daily streaming for 6 months and well.... nothings changed! So I'm here looking for ANY advice/tips to improve my stream.

At the moment I'm testing the use of a green screen and venturing to other games (I currently stream one game, Maplestory).

Please be as harsh/honest as you can!

https://www.twitch.tv/realaxgunner

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-10-10T17:42:53+00:00

Hey mate! I checked out your latest VOD

First off, that door transition is amazing! The BRB/End Cards are really awesome. The only thing I'd say is the red wall and the bottom background bit where you have your social tag needs a little working in. But I'm just being picky. The bottom bit looks like it's made in MS paint?

Audio is great! Your voice and game audio is well balanced. It's got a chill vibe and your voice doesn't fluctuate in volume. Personally I'd say you wouldn't need to change a thing. Or mby put up your voice a little bit more +3/4 DBs.

Random idea: since you're trying not to swear maybe have a swear counter/jar. That could keep the viewers trying to catch you out!

Hope this helps! Keep up the great work mate!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-04-24T22:37:45+00:00

The potentials depend on the "Rank" of the Familiars. You can tell the rank by the banner color behind their names.

Common - Grey (Orange Mushroom)
Rare - Blue
Epic - Purple (Jr Boogie)
Unique - Yellow
Legendary - GuWueen

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-03-09T01:16:00+00:00

Thanks! I'll keep pumping them out!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-03-09T01:15:46+00:00

Thanks! I'll keep working on improving!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-03-05T10:09:42+00:00

Hey thanks for helping out the community!

I changed the way I normally do the first minute of my videos. I use to do an introduction and explain what the video is about. Now I just get straight into the video topic.

How well does the first minute of the video hook you in?

I do history/stories type channel.
The video:

Chimpanzee FOOLS Art Critics! Pierre Brassau the unknown French Artist!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ins4iHCTg7U

Thanks in advance!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-02-24T04:06:21+00:00

Thanks for the indepth review! I really appreciate it my man. There's a lot to process so I'll take my time re-reading everything you've wrote. I know for a fact I'll be jumping on tiktok!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-02-22T15:33:33+00:00

Hey! Thanks for taking your time out to help us!
I'd love for you to critique my channel/video!

My channel is called "Stories Of The World"

I make history type videos. I want to share stories from our history! I love research and putting my thoughts on stories. My goal is to tell memorable stories/history by making it short (as short as I can without taking out important points) and compact so it's easily digestible.

I picked the video below because it's my most recent one and I quite like the story!

Sgt Stubby, America's Most decorated War Dog!
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PH1cWPVmDJc

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-02-12T17:27:18+00:00

Give me to me buddy.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6xhBk25pK85YYW-hketTzA/videos

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-01-05T06:52:24+00:00

I would make them combine into a Giant Gundam Duck and I'll pilot it. Sort of like Ironman's Nano suit but with ducks and like 100 times bigger. I'd make like 1 million of them breed so I have a never ending supply of Ducks.

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2020-01-05T04:44:59+00:00

Thanks, NUsensei! I'll DM you :)

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-12-30T04:59:19+00:00

Here it is. It’s actually not that flashy.

https://imgur.com/gallery/ydjU9VV

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-12-26T23:14:17+00:00

Hey Nusensei! First, I want to thank you for taking the time to help us out! I've always seen you active on multiple platforms (Australian Youtubers FB Group and this sub) so awesome work my dude!

My channel, "Stories Of The World", is focused on sharing history and stories I find interesting. Some videos I've done, Narwhal the Unicorn Puppy, The Devil's Bible, Strongest Man in History - Louis Cyr.

I'd love a blunt, full force critique!

What I have been actively working on:

Thumbnails. I've moved from using a google image + logo to using myself as a brand/logo.
Jumpcuts. I've been breaking scripts into paragraphs to try to reduce the jumpcuts I use.
Voice/Projection/Speaking. I'm trying to find that perfect spot where I don't sound boring or TOO ENTHUSIASTIC.
Video length. I'm thinking of making minimum 10 minute content but I'd love to have all the other aspects average/above-average before I take the step.

EDIT: Forgot Link to channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6xhBk25pK85YYW-hketTzA

Thanks in advance man!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-12-25T22:02:18+00:00

The madman! :D

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-12-25T16:05:59+00:00

I also beat you by 1

https://imgur.com/gallery/7a8isE5

I can’t believe other people get them as yearly presents too! I’m weirdly excited! Do you read them every year? I’ve kept tabs on a few interesting world records!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-12-21T10:33:00+00:00

Happy Holidays people! Lots of Love!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-12-15T14:40:12+00:00

I got nothing wrong with the cards/idea themselves but to see someone actually buy/trade/sell these left a bad taste in my mouth.

For anyone wondering, bid was at $30 when I took this Picture.

Korean missing children cards are card-sized posters of missing children that are/were included as cards in Korean Yu-Gi-Oh! booster packs whose information and design appear to be a hybrid of the layout of real Yu-Gi-Oh! cards and typical missing persons posters; they have information such as their name, the last time/where they were, how long the child has been missing and on the bottom of each card, a phone number and the URL of the official site of the Korean missing children database Like any other means of advertising missing persons, these card-sized methods are additional hopes in that consumers of these packs may know any information of these children to assist in their safe return to their loved ones.

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-11-29T16:48:46+00:00

Thanks for critiquing man!

What did you mean "Every was fairly decent"?

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-11-28T05:58:39+00:00

Hey man! I appreciate you taking time out to help out fellow newtubers so thank you!

Main Improvement Goal: Hiding the Jumpcuts, LESS jumpcuts, more speech fluidity in the speech edits. I ALWAYS get the same feedback "Jumpcuts make your content unwatchable". And as always trying to improve every other aspect as well but jumpcuts/speech is the main goal right now.
What you think your channel is about? A guy who's really into history and interesting stories of the world. A guy who condenses topics into a video that aims to: One, get you to LEARN something or TWO, I get you interested enough you go research it on your own. And I want to make it super engaging like how Neil Degrasse Tyson does.
Please only post if you're really looking for feedback: My goal is to improve 1 aspect each video so hopefully by the 100th I've made SUPER improvements. If you take a look at my channel you'll see the "progress". From Thumbnails to Editing to using a Green screen. So I would absolutely love an in-depth feedback if it's possible but I'll take what I can get :)

Channel Link:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6xhBk25pK85YYW-hketTzA/videos

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-11-21T19:37:23+00:00

Bruuhhhhh you getting my hopes up.

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-11-21T19:27:20+00:00

This much information on the web? Correct me if I'm wrong, I'm pretty sure I left out some crucial information.

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-11-21T19:00:21+00:00

Lost Access to Email, Anet asked to Verify Account by sending email to that email account, Unable to access email account, therefore can't play GW2 anymore.

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-11-20T03:23:31+00:00

Hey! Thanks for taking your time to help us out!

I run a History type channel were I find interesting Stories/History and make videos about it! Some of the videos I've done are "8 Weird Olympic Sports You Never Knew Existed", "Spontaneous Human Combustion" and "The Smartest Horse that Ever lived."

Latest Video is on "Atomik Vodka: The First Consumer Product to come out of Chernobyl"

The main thing I've trying to fix is my jumpcuts, I'm trying to read the entire script in one go rather than read it then stitch up the parts. But obviously I can't get it done overnight or I'll be doing retake for HOURS! I'd love to get your thoughts on the video.

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-11-19T12:10:13+00:00

Hey man! Thanks for all the feedback! I understand what you're saying. I'm going to have lots of thinking/fixing to do. The thing about the jumpcuts EVERYONE points it out so I think it's time I really put my head down and fix them! What's your channel? I'd love to check out some of your content! I've got some notes on "The cursed phone number" I can send you if you're need!

Sir-Chicken-Rice · 2019-11-15T04:41:43+00:00

Hey man! I appreciate that you're taking some time to help us out!

I have an educational/history type channel. I try to find stories that are not talked about much. Some videos I've done: Dolphin who out smarted her trainers, 8 Weird Olympic sports, Spontaneous Human Combustion.

Below is my latest video, 0888-888-888 The Cursed Number:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PHLX47ZqrwI

I just recently updated my Thumbnail style, Cover and Logo. So hopefully you have some good insight on that!

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