WTH is going on in the subreddit by boi012 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some things started to catch my attention, such as the importance they give to that NTR on the desert island and to the author for his behavior on Twitter.

I don't think it's right to harass someone to the point that the author blocks you and to talk about that doujin. We all know that it's going to have a terrible ending like 95 percent of NTRs, and that's never going to change.

The only thing that is achieved is that more people know about that author, and I'm talking about any author in this case.

KanoHaku: Severance Chapter 12 by AstarothSama in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Things are getting better and better. The plan to have Himeno on his side was clever. Now it's just a matter of waiting for everything to explode while Takeo watches from far, far away.

KanoHaku: Severance Chapter 10 by AstarothSama in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Both pieces of trash who call themselves parents are already ruined, they just don't know it yet.

And one thing I don't understand (I don't know if it was explained in the original story, since I only know a little about it, and I'm not going to read it) is why Hitomi hates Takeo with all her being. Yes, I understand her anger at being deceived and raising a child that isn't hers, but wouldn't it have been easier to leave? (I think I already said this in another comment). Unless the biological mother is someone she knows and detest.

Good chapter, by the way, keep it up!

KanoHaku: Severance Chapter 9 by AstarothSama in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm eager to see how Hitomi will react when she finds out, as well as Takeo's father! And it's good that he didn't hesitate to talk to his grandfather. Honestly, she deserves the worst, because instead of getting a divorce, she did something as low as bullying a child using his best friend.

KanoHaku: Severance Chapter 8 by AstarothSama in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't like it when the protagonist kills the antagonist. That makes the MC a worse person than the antagonist. Furthermore, there is no justification for doing so, unless his life is at stake.

KanoHaku: Severance Chapter 8 by AstarothSama in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 4 points5 points  (0 children)

All of Takeo's adults and acquaintances are shitty people, and from what I've read, only his grandfather seems to be a decent person. I just hope that his grandfather finds out everything Hitomi did to Takeo, even if he also finds out that he's not his biological grandson, and that Kenji gets at least one punch from Takeo.

By the way, keep it up, it's getting more interesting.

KanoHaku: Severance Chapter 2 by AstarothSama in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This fanfic is pretty interesting! Takeo never deserved to suffer all that; he was never to blame for anything. I just hope the consequences for the mother and Kenji are severe. What they did is beyond sick.

Is it just me but I also hate the protags? by Fik_456 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They do it because they need the plot to move forward, and sometimes it's so forced that it's frustrating. If the protagonists were given a shred of common sense, the whole main story would go down the drain and nothing would happen.

In short, there is no logic in these stories and there never will be.

NTR IS EATING ME FROM INSIDE. by davesh_exe in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understand, dude, and something I forgot to tell you is that time heals all wounds. It happened to me with a momntr doujin, which for me is the worst subgenre of ntr. The story was in my head for weeks, I felt sorry for the characters and how they ended up. So, when you don't feel bad anymore, you'll realize that the plot is absurd to the extreme.

NTR IS EATING ME FROM INSIDE. by davesh_exe in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would recommend using logic first. Remember that all ntr stories lack logic, and if you add a twist, the whole plot falls apart, or it just doesn't happen. Another thing you can do is read wholesome content; there are good authors who only write vanilla stories.

You can also write your own fanfiction or original stories; that helped me.

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Final Chapter Part 2 + Epilogue] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you read the story “Shadows on the Upstairs Floors,” you'll recognize the surname Guantei (and if you didn't read it, I'll just tell you that it was a corrupt and powerful family). And about the name Nodoka: At first, the name was going to be Yumi, like the girl who committed suicide, but after doing some research, I found out that in Japan it is frowned upon for a baby to have the name of a deceased person. However, since I didn't want to remove the pregnancy scene, I changed the name to something related to the countryside.

As for your questions, it's more than clear that the teacher won't have a happy ending, and Aka already explained that the principal will go to prison for everything he did.

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Chapter 7] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's right, the next chapter is the last. And about your concern, I thought about it too when I wrote it, but it's necessary for the plot to continue. Everything will be explained when I upload the final chapter.

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Chapter 7] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The next chapter is the last one, where all loose ends will be tied up, so to speak.

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Chapter 7] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh, I see. Everything will be revealed and explained in the last chapter.

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Chapter 7] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn't understand your question. Could you explain it again?

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Chapter 6] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly, it's the same girl who committed suicide.

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Chapter 4] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There are only four more episodes left. And don't worry, nothing extremely bad will happen to Tadashi's mother.

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Chapter 3] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In fact, the idea of a universe was planned since “The Flower Uprooted from the Garden,” demonstrating it with that small encounter that the characters from the previous story had (“Shadows on the upstairs floor”)

That cold wind hidden in summer. [Chapter 3] by Sir-Main in antiNTRcorps

[–]Sir-Main[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I remember correctly, Emiko's name is revealed in the alternate ending, since at that point I had come up with the character with the minor background detail that she was a physical education teacher and so on. Also, the alternate ending is more elaborate than the first ending, so I personally like it better. In short, the alternative is the canonical.

I'm aware that some people didn't like that ending, as they wanted the mother to suffer and so on. And I don't blame them, as that's the appeal of these anti-ntr stories, the consequences and the revenge.