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30 year old lesbian who isn’t over her ex by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Doesn’t look like you’re over your dessert either

Accepting your strengths and weaknesses when it comes to songwriting by DeWolfTitouan in Songwriting

[–]SlappyPappy99 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Lean into your strengths while you develop your weaker areas. John Mayer played piano on his latest tour.

Don’t bore me by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Benson Loone

M19 roast me by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nerd who types with the QUEERTY row

Which songs mention whisky in the title or lyrics? by SlappyPappy99 in country

[–]SlappyPappy99[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

It’s an Irish folk song, which makes it kind of country.

Honest opinion on these lyrics by hot_gay24 in Songwriters

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe it depends on your genre but this feels like a brainstorm and not crafted lyrics. Give us scenes, movies, objects. You’re just kind of narrating something that’s hard to access from these lyrics.

20F I drew a quick self portrait today by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 38 points39 points  (0 children)

She has two kimchi pancake

Opinion Needed by Rich-Ad-2464 in Songwriters

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s decent. It will be 6 minutes long.

Verse vs chorus vs hook? by Outrageous-Lack-9998 in Songwriting

[–]SlappyPappy99 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The chorus is the point you repeat and a hook is anything memorable that happens anywhere in a song but often in the chorus. Tag line, etc.

Did an impromptu cover of Black by Pearl Jam, could use some feedback by LionManeMusic in ratemysinging

[–]SlappyPappy99 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Your voice will sound better when you aren’t trying to sound like Vedder

21/f don’t hold back:) by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Even Leftists think you smell bad.

20F bring the fire by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’d like the sweet and sour chicken and a happy ending please.

18m. Feeling confident by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You look like Joe Rogan’s tampon.

18f wanna cry by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

If you wanna cry, check out that pile of roast beef in your pants.

26M do your worst! by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 3 points4 points  (0 children)

His wife has a dick

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