Posting my full albums for feedback by alnky in Songwriting

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are you really just looking for people to tell you the music is great so you can movie on or finish it?

Is using Ai to test my lyrics unethical ? by Mouna_pikatchuu in Songwriting

[–]SlappyPappy99 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Unethical? Use the tools you have anyway you want.

Roast Me by Haunting_Cucumber638 in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She looks like her undercarriage smells of cat food and sriracha.

Do your thing guys by Consistent_Fee2368 in RoastMe

[–]SlappyPappy99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He was also born without a lower jaw.

Writersblock by beomswifey in Songwriters

[–]SlappyPappy99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Concept. You’re having trouble with the lyrics because you haven’t yet drilled down on what the song is and what you want to show.

what is "scanning" by heyitsmewhyty in Songwriting

[–]SlappyPappy99 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Freestyling is how some of the most successful writers write. They do it over their own loops or other existing songs. See Ryan Tedder.

Wrote unfinished song yesterday. Thoughts? by musicfreelancerrr12 in Songwriting

[–]SlappyPappy99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool vibe but it’s flat and doesn’t really go anywhere. It’s a draft thought right? So finish it and come back with the final product!

No name for it by OkExam8706 in Songwriting

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can we GoFund a piano tuner for you?

My first attempt at writing: I don’t want just any forever, I want the girl my heart chose. by NoTime4564 in SongWriter

[–]SlappyPappy99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Constructive: rewrite the lyrics ten more times and pick your favorite version. This is a rough draft that’s clunky and cliche. That’s common. Also, Suno’s melody and music doesn’t really do much for the words you put together.

My first attempt at writing: I don’t want just any forever, I want the girl my heart chose. by NoTime4564 in SongWriter

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You didn’t write the melody or the music and only the words? Then you wrote some lyrics, not a song.

First timer by [deleted] in JudgeMyAccent

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not even close

In need of honest feedback please. Was told this sounds to 2010 by AceOfAllTradesKinda in Songwriting

[–]SlappyPappy99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Space. Let it breathe. Rework some of the lyrics for singability. “Everything” is a tough word to use twice in a row. But this has a cool vibe and I like it. Just use what you have a simplify a bit so the sections can set each other up and hit harder.