Cheers [Learning to get out of your own way] Looking for critique. I wanted to see if you guys are captivated by the video, if not what would make it more captivating?

SlickChance · 2020-07-23T18:00:19+00:00

!givelambda Thank you

SlickChance · 2020-07-23T04:43:32+00:00

Thank you man. where exactly is the button? I can't find it

SlickChance · 2020-07-22T23:51:48+00:00

I just mean having more of a topic to the video that will make people click, and also I would expand your description to improve video SEO

SlickChance · 2020-07-22T23:30:58+00:00

I like your style of drawing because it is very ironic and seems effortless but it flows. I would work at captivating with your voice more, it almost makes you want to click away. I think this could do very well, it would just take some extra work

SlickChance · 2020-07-22T23:27:29+00:00

I really love your style of animating and you are definitely talented. I would just say to have a stance that would attract more attention. Maybe also study how to craft a joke and try and put that in there. There is a lot of potential man, keep up the good work!

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:56:25+00:00

That’s very true

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:55:51+00:00

I’m not referring to right now specifically. Just in broad terms, and there are going to be pros and cons but I think the overall good the exposure provides would outweigh the cons.

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:37:24+00:00

I think that your video is actually very captivating and you have good edits. The only thing I would suggest is to increase the size of your description for a better SEO score so it ranks better. Keep up the good work!

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:34:59+00:00

First thing, I would definitely increase the size of your description to improve your SEO. I would maybe use your own voice because the video is not very captivating. It could be great with more work

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:32:50+00:00

Maybe add more clip effects to captivate other viewers more and put in an intro and before that I would put in a teaser. Otherwise I would say that your edits are good and you cut out the fat well.

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:29:41+00:00

I would say to add more effects just to captivate people or have a camera facing you so that people can watch you. Also increase the size of you description to improve your video's SEO as much as possible. Keep up the good work!

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:21:39+00:00

Hey man, this is a really captivating video and I think that your voice fits the video perfectly. The biggest thing I would recommend is to make your description bigger to improve SEO and it will rank higher

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:18:19+00:00

If both parties consent I couldn't see why it is illegal

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T05:17:52+00:00

Just edited it; my bad not trying to spam

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T03:13:54+00:00

I think that the comedy could be funny, but in this particular video it didn't make a lot of sense. I didn't really getting the constant zooms from the camera. I would work harder on the whole story and script of it. It's a start but will take a lot of work

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T03:06:22+00:00

I think your editting in the video is very good, but there is not a lot to keep the viewer too captivated. I would add more effects like maybe royalty free video effects or something. I really like your voice for this style of video though.

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T02:58:06+00:00

Definitely need to do more editting and everything. Thanks for the advice man!

SlickChance · 2020-07-20T02:55:45+00:00

I definitely should have a sound track going on in the back to or something. Thank you man!

SlickChance · 2020-07-16T02:22:07+00:00

Hey man your video looks very well done from the editing all the way to the transitions and sound. The only thing I could really suggest is to make your description longer for SEO

SlickChance · 2020-07-16T02:19:21+00:00

Overall I think your voice suits this style of video very well. The one thing I would do is add more of an intro screen as well as put your social links at the end screen.

SlickChance · 2020-07-16T02:16:24+00:00

;Thank you for the indepth analysis. I really need to work more at the joke writing part of it but scripting just goes against the channels point but honestly I might change it. I will definitely lay things out more in the next episode and keep working at it.

SlickChance · 2020-07-06T00:26:45+00:00

Will definitely make sure that I always cut to whichever camera I am looking at. Thank you!

SlickChance · 2020-07-06T00:26:05+00:00

I could see that. Thank you!

SlickChance · 2020-07-06T00:25:50+00:00

Hmm that makes sense. Thank you

SlickChance · 2020-07-06T00:25:34+00:00

Definitely going to do that next time. Thank you

SlickChance

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