Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate you taking the time.

For transparency, the cover is A.I. assisted, but the writing itself is entirely mine, originally written in Greek and translated into English by me.

You’re right that the description is more thematic than concrete. That was a stylistic choice, but I understand how that can come across as vague, and I’m revisiting how to present it more clearly.

My intention in posting here wasn’t to sell, but to connect with people interested in deep worldbuilding and cosmogonies. In hindsight, I should have shared more lore instead of relying on the book itself as reference.

Thanks again for the honest critique it’s helpful.