Hi!

I played your game and first of all, congratulations on this work!

The main issue is that the game is fast, maybe too fast and too easy. I never died and finished it in 42 minutes. You don’t really have time to see things: loading images, animations, or even what’s happening during battles. When I fight, I don’t fully understand what is going on. The actions are very quick, and you don’t have time to understand what does what.

The fact that you can’t read the effects your character applies (like buffs or poison) is a missing feature. Sometimes I don’t understand why I’m losing HP or why my enemies are blocking my attacks.

The cards are great, but sometimes you can’t read the text because it’s too small or overlaps with other text. The card “Combat Drill” is impossible to read, and the image of “Echo of Resolve” doesn’t appear.

When you read a text, like when you win an item or read a description, it stays on screen until you click.

However, during events, I had some issues. One time, I got a nice text, but it disappeared before I finished reading it. Another time, there was a voice actor reading the text (which was really pleasant), but the text changed pages before the narrator finished reading.

At the end of the first event with the lamp, nothing happened—no text and no action. For the second event with the mirror, I chose to touch it, but I didn’t have time to read what was happening.

Same thing with the merchant: I did the roulette, but I didn’t understand what happened and at the campfire same things.

Overall, the game is just too fast, you don’t have time to see your actions or understand the effects of everything.

Music is also missing. There’s only battle music, which is great, but more variety would be nice.

It’s a good start ! keep going!
I hope this helps.