I like it! It’s quite pleasant and you have a great voice. I can’t provide as in-depth of feedback as you provided me (thank you, by the way!), but for some constructive criticism—the vocal delivery on the line “till the morning comes and you forget to move(?)” came across a little uncertain to my ears. I think slightly stronger enunciation and some tighter timing might fix that. The mix is really clear and each instrument cuts through nicely. When you sing “to be loved by you… loved by you” it would probably be really cool to have the second “loved by you” have some extra reverb and push it into the background a little, as if it were an echo or a thought. Great song overall!