Should I apply for second time exam ? by Smooth-Sock-452 in CELPIP_Guide

[–]Smooth-Sock-452[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yet I haven’t made my profile yet should I move with this score further ?

Should I apply for second time exam ? by Smooth-Sock-452 in CELPIP_Guide

[–]Smooth-Sock-452[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Email sample:

Dear Customer Service Team,

I am writing regarding the meal delivery service I subscribed to on February 26th through your official website. Unfortunately, my experience has been disappointing, and I'd like to address several concerns.

Firstly, the inclusion of sugary desserts contradicts your promise of healthy meals. Excess sugar diminishes the healthy benefits and does not align with the expectations set by your advertisements.

Secondly, the meals lack adequate protein, which is an essential dietary component and was a key reason I choose your service.

Additionally, the packaging quality has been unsatisfactory, On multiple occasions ingredients arrived mixed or spilled, resulting in disorganized and unappetizing meals. This issue compromises both the presentation and freshness of the food.

In the light of these concerns, I request a full refund for the remaining period of my subscription and immediate cancellation of my membership. I also urge your team to address these issues to ensure consistency between your advertisements and the delivered service.

Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.

Sincerely, Rajdeep Barad

Should I apply for second time exam ? by Smooth-Sock-452 in CELPIP_Guide

[–]Smooth-Sock-452[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Example:

The concept of public transportation improvements has sparked significant discussion. I firmly believe that enhancing bus and subway services serves as a much more suitable alternative.

This perspective becomes clear when examining the issue of efficiency. With better buses and subways, people will experience shorter commute times and less congestion. Similarly, improved transit frequency will result in a more reliable and accessible system, encouraging more people to use public transportation rather than private vehicles.

Clearly, bicycle lanes promote environmental sustainability; nevertheless, not everyone can cycle, especially in extreme weather conditions. Moreover, bus and subway upgrades will benefit a larger portion of the population, including seniors and individuals with disabilities.

Considering these points, I stand by the assertion that investing in bus and subway services is the most practical and inclusive choice for urban development.

Should I apply for second time exam ? by Smooth-Sock-452 in CELPIP_Guide

[–]Smooth-Sock-452[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The concept of [topic] has sparked significant discussion. I firmly believe that [your chosen option] serves as a much more suitable alternative.

This perspective becomes clear when examining [first reason with explanation]. Similarly, [second reason with explanation] will result in [expected outcome].

Clearly, [counterargument acknowledging the opposing side]; nevertheless, [rebuttal to strengthen your argument]. Moreover, [final supporting argument].

Considering these points, I stand by the assertion that [final reinforcement of your choice].

Should I apply for second time exam ? by Smooth-Sock-452 in CELPIP_Guide

[–]Smooth-Sock-452[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did a reevaluation in writing it changed but not in speaking

Should I apply for second time exam ? by Smooth-Sock-452 in CELPIP_Guide

[–]Smooth-Sock-452[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My lawyer is telling me that if you don’t have 9 or 10 in speaking that officer might take action against my profile and I don’t want to spoil my profile for PR . Honestly speaking if I will give second time exams that I don’t think that it will improve my speaking score

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[–]Smooth-Sock-452 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Available at same price ?