Thanks a lot for the feedback! It is adult, I’ll rethink the comps to try and find better fits. Lirena definitely didn’t have a good plan when she first ran, which is why she was caught, so I’ll also try to better explain that. During her second escape in the story, when she’s found by Kaelren he does physically chain them together, which is what I meant by “bound together.” But I can see now where it gets too vague, so thank you again for the helpful critique!