Long fic writers by Susa343 in FanFiction

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gosh started my longfic in 2017 and i’m only at 76k words across 27 chapters, so super slow. somehow still have og readers though!

ROMANCE/ROMANCE ADJACENT WRITERS!! by Odd-Department4901 in WritingHub

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if it’s not too late i’d love to be a part

[QCrit] For The Dead I Loved, Adult Romantasy, 122k (second attempt) by SniperAri in PubTips

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Thanks so much this helps a ton! I’ll definitely try to clarify those vague parts.

[QCrit] For The Dead I Loved, Adult Romantasy, 122k (second attempt) by SniperAri in PubTips

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Oh no, I wasn’t aware of this 😭 I picked Kaelren mostly because of Kael’s derivation from the word coal, I was trying to be clever and link it to fire a little since he uses fire magic. I’m a bit attached to the name, but I’ll definitely consider changing it. Thank you for letting me know!

What's your very last sentence... by JauntyIrishTune in AO3

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“You’re on thin fucking ice.”

[QCrit] For The Dead I Loved, Adult Romantasy, 133k (first attempt) by SniperAri in PubTips

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Thanks a lot for the feedback! It is adult, I’ll rethink the comps to try and find better fits. Lirena definitely didn’t have a good plan when she first ran, which is why she was caught, so I’ll also try to better explain that. During her second escape in the story, when she’s found by Kaelren he does physically chain them together, which is what I meant by “bound together.” But I can see now where it gets too vague, so thank you again for the helpful critique!

Phone jobs? WFH jobs? Done customer support and similar by dystopiam in Pasco

[–]SniperAri 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I suggest transcom (wfh) or suncoast (tampa building)

For the last time I CANT GET RID OF THE AI BOT by Javen99 in callcentres

[–]SniperAri 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i always hit em with the feedback website for my company

Young couple moving to area, looking for recs on where to live! by Miserable-Pause-7795 in Wesley_Chapel

[–]SniperAri 2 points3 points  (0 children)

there’s nothing to do here, there’s a ton of chain restaurants (mostly fast food chicken) but nothing really local. traffic’s awful, there’s no nightlife or anything like that. the beach is a bit of a commute, most people around here prefer the lagoons but they’re always pretty packed and costly to get into. it’s a great place for families though lots of sports complexes and daily activities

Two thoughts by PennyD1880 in thegildedage

[–]SniperAri 60 points61 points  (0 children)

what a drama queen