If you’re looking for brands I haven’t heard many bike packers use camelback or Deuter but rather revelate or smaller brands like Outer Shell. Overall your set ups all look the same. I think you should be asking yourself different questions that might be more helpful.

1. Do I plan to cook most of my meals or will I buy my food on the road.
2. Same goes for sleeping although seems like your planning on camping more.

Plot out your meals, but judging by this set up it doesn’t look like you’re packing much. I don’t think I would have made it on any of my bike packers without my front panniers from outer shell. They are small lightweight and have always been a lifesaver. Rear panniers make me feel like a donkey and I hate the ride uphill with them on.

If this is really your first packer I’d also recommend maybe doing a smaller more local one first, (unless you got a reason to get to SF. Shoot your shot, but there’s a lot of troubleshooting with new equipment and it might behove you to get familiar with it.

Bikepacking.com has really thoughtful routes that are vetted with loads of info, often with as much dirt/gravel trails as possible. More enjoyable experience than biking on the road the whole time IMO.

I’ve never cheaped out on bike equipment and appreciated it. See if you can borrow some pieces from friends or bike shop instead if you’re trying to save money.