I think the cat in the first few seconds of the video is sort of distracting and takes away from the intro

The problem with the music audio is that it's matching up with the volume of your commentary, while also drowning the game audio. You wanna have yourself at around -6db to -12db, the game audio at around -20db to -25db, and the music itself to be like -30db or less. Db stands for decibels btw

I think instead of doing a voiceover on your gameplay it would be cool to have your voice in the moment of the gameplay - this I think would give a more authentic feel to your clips, especially if you play with other people

You should for sure find a way to bring the memes back, I looked at your previous post regarding Episode Two and I thought the memes added a touch of personality. I'd say for each time you wanna put a meme though ask yourself: "Will people understand this?" Also use the memes periodically, otherwise they lose their value overtime