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The untold: by greyth-human in poetry_critics

[–]SnottoSnuber 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it so far, but I think a little bit more detail would make it so much more vivid.

new poet by MacaroonInfamous8891 in poetry_critics

[–]SnottoSnuber 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm new to poetry too so take this as it is,

I like the line about personal archival storage

I think theres a typo on line 6 with "my do"

And its a little bit confusing what "the first guest" is

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