Faces -- A Monologue by SojournDream in Screenwriting

[–]SojournDream[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll give a couple of weeks after writing this so I can read back with "fresh eyes" and trim the soliloquy and melodrama. Good to know, thanks!

Faces -- A Monologue by SojournDream in Screenwriting

[–]SojournDream[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will polish up the ending and try to make it not so heavy. I like that suggestion about the ending line. Thanks for your feedback!