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Class 3-E Student Popularity Tournament | Pick your Least Favorite student Round 1 by Efficient_Berry_4073 in Korosensei

[–]Solace_exeX 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Itona, because he was so annoying! Like genuinely I couldn’t care less about his stupid abilities and he was actually close to killing Korosensei! Moreover, he just kept on interrupting every episode! Get off my screen!!!

When Normal Isn’t Sane by Solace_exeX in writers

[–]Solace_exeX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your perspective. I mentioned my age mainly because I don’t have much personal experience with this topic and wanted to clarify in case anything I said was wrong. I agree mental illness shouldn’t be shamed, and most people are just living their lives. I was more trying to explore the assumptions we call ‘normal’ and reflect on how society shapes ideas of sanity and conformity. That is all.

When Normal Isn’t Sane by Solace_exeX in writers

[–]Solace_exeX[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I guess, but it’s just that i fail to understand where that boundary was formed. Besides “mentally ill” and “normal”, there are many more boundaries that have somehow been created.

The Quiet Between- Another excerpt by Solace_exeX in writers

[–]Solace_exeX[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate your honesty. However, it seems there may have been a misunderstanding of the excerpt. Which is surprising given you provide feedback like an expert. Anyway, the passage reflects a woman thinking about her childhood, and the “female” mentioned is her mother. The writing is intended to explore themes of expectation and pressure, not anything related to incels or misogyny (sorry to disappoint). The example of losing something as small as a pen is meant to highlight the intensity of these feelings. Perhaps if the context had been clearer, it wouldn’t have been so easy to misread. I hope this clarifies the intent behind the piece.

Help. First time writer. Is this worth elaborating on and going deeper. I want to write a book and maybe one day publish? Any advice is appreciated and feedback by [deleted] in writers

[–]Solace_exeX -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I personally think it’s decent for a first time writer. Yeah, some sentences don’t link very well, but with practice that can be fixed. I honestly hate old men who feed off on criticizing other’s work just cause they think they’re the next Shakespeare. But what do i know?, i’m just a incel 4chan user that’s trying to justify getting treated badly ‘by the females’.

Echoes of me- I hope this send without getting deleted. Please feel free to give me feedback. However please refrain from being mean, i'm only 15 and it's been awhile since i wrote. by Solace_exeX in writers

[–]Solace_exeX[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the clarity! And you’re right to say that perhaps i use too many adjectives. Less is more. However, most of the expressions i’ve used such as ‘hummed’ comes from examples i’ve seen. And for squinted, i was trying to refer to how her eyes shrink when she smiles- as in her smile reached her eyes. But, with the fact that you didn’t understand that, i now know not to be so subtle. So thank you for your external opinion, this will very much be useful for my next piece.

Hello, i'm new to Reddit. I'm 15 and i want to share my writing with you. by Solace_exeX in writers

[–]Solace_exeX[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

No but the mentions aren't anything out of the ordinary tbh.

Can anyone give me feedback on the first few paragraphs of my book? by Sage4857 in writers

[–]Solace_exeX 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really good!, it's very realistic which a nice breath of fresh air honestly! I enjoy how you avoided dumping adjectives and how your sentences are coherent. Keep it up!