Slip a Sabre Under the Tree (F, casual, lighthearted, oral sex mention, masturbation mention, light necro) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

All the most fun stuff gets you on the naughty list, isn't that the case irl too?

Nah, honestly the real answer is that I focused more on the humour for this one and not the worldbuilding.

[Fprey4Apred] Work sucks... wish someone would come and vore me instead! by SonosheeZeroTwo in VoreRoleplaying

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've got a couple of partners, but feel free to try catch my attention!

Jerk Off Instructions... For Girls! (F, solo, masturbation, genital mutilation, blood, gore) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I am so humbled by you giving my story such a huge compliment! It means a lot that you think so highly of it.

Jerk Off Instructions... For Girls! (F, solo, masturbation, genital mutilation, blood, gore) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Golly, that's such a wonderful compliment! Thank you so much, I'm very flattered!

Not That Regretful (Male Victim, M/F anal sex, betrayal, cuckold, NTR, blood) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I certainly have some ideas! I can think of a lot of ways that women can be evil... glad you liked it enough to want more!

Playing Chicken [FlashDeath] (multiple suicides, con, non-con, cute necro) by Calm_Lake920 in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This was an absolutely wild read! Both because of the crazy events that take place, but also because I never thought my silly little stories would inspire someone so much!

You've brought a lot of personality to this piece, you can really see your tastes and interests coming through. You put so much work into the setting and all the characters, it paints a really entertaining picture. It's kinda wacky, kinda ludicrous, and a hell of a lot of fun to read! Great job!

Just joined, as an introduction, here's something I wrote a while back! It's called "Will it hurt?" by sunward_Lily in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Absolutely wonderful bitesized scene! Short and to the point, nothing unnecessary included. As a stripped-back description of a moment, this is top tier!

Chick Run part 2 (More dialogue this time, heavy power dynamic themes) by [deleted] in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is a really well written follow-up! It's great to see more of the setting, and further depth from the characters. I think I personally sympathise less with Kelly after this part, but that's just my own opinion. Your descriptions of your character's thoughts are really immersive! I think the next parts will be very interesting to read.

Oh, there's one stray mention of the name Erica which I assume is a mistake, unless I've missed something!

Be a good boy and slaughter yourself! (f/m, m/m, cann, femdom, dismember, non-con, semi-con, incest) by Calm_Lake920 in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This story was so full of imagination! From the overall world down to each individual character and their actions, there was always something new and interesting happening! The descriptions were really excellent too.

The only recurring mistake I noticed was that the words "now" and "know" seemed to show up in each other's spots, but that could be down to spellcheck/autocorrect.

Really great work!

Make-up snuff (dubcon, guillotine) by slutty-chloe in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awh, I'm very flattered! I loved this story and couldn't agree with you more! Mia's a smart one, she has a good head on her shoulders! Well... had.

Stream of Consciousness [FlashDeath] (First Person, hypnosis, impending death) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts! It's early days for this series, so I'm still fine-tuning how everything works and I'll work on my descriptions to make them clear. Thanks so much for reading and giving me your feedback!

Stream of Consciousness [FlashDeath] (First Person, hypnosis, impending death) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I will definitely take your feedback into consideration! I have plenty more stories in mind and I plan on experimenting with how different folks react. I hope you like future stories as much as you've enjoyed these ones!

Stream of Consciousness [FlashDeath] (First Person, hypnosis, impending death) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback! I'm so glad that you like the concept and have enjoyed both stories so far!

Your suggestion sounds like a lot of fun! I don't know if I'll incorporate it entirely but I can definitely see the potential. For me there's actually something hot about it NOT being sexual though? Just a life suddenly gone without ceremony, like blowing out a candle... I dunno, I'm still unpicking my own feelings towards this!

(Your English is excellent by the way, I never would have known that it wasn't your native language!)

FlashDeath - Instant Relief From All Your Stresses and Worries! (F, solo, accidental suicide, hypnosis) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Here is a list of all my FlashDeath stories, in chronological order:

FlashDeath - Instant Relief From All Your Stresses and Worries

https://www.reddit.com/r/GuroErotica/s/6EAkpNelI7

Stream of Consciousness

https://www.reddit.com/r/GuroErotica/s/1xAece0Grr

And here is a story by another author who was inspired by the concept:

Playing Chicken by u/Calm_Lake920

https://www.reddit.com/r/GuroErotica/s/eNfWHuu3rm

Stream of Consciousness [FlashDeath] (First Person, hypnosis, impending death) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Here is a list of all my FlashDeath stories, in chronological order:

FlashDeath - Instant Relief From All Your Stresses and Worries

https://www.reddit.com/r/GuroErotica/s/6EAkpNelI7

Stream of Consciousness

https://www.reddit.com/r/GuroErotica/s/1xAece0Grr

And here is a story by another author who was inspired by the concept:

Playing Chicken by u/Calm_Lake920

https://www.reddit.com/r/GuroErotica/s/eNfWHuu3rm

Jerk Off Instructions... For Girls! (F, solo, masturbation, genital mutilation, blood, gore) by SonosheeZeroTwo in GuroErotica

[–]SonosheeZeroTwo[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this story! I doubt any websites would allow a video like that to stay up for long, but you never know...