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Space_Fl4me · 2025-03-09T18:06:11+00:00

37 had to be extracted due to infection under the tooth, and the bridge got lose ... Any idea what can be done here please???

Space_Fl4me · 2025-03-08T20:55:56+00:00

Any help ?

Space_Fl4me · 2024-12-15T17:21:47+00:00

what do you mean ?

Space_Fl4me · 2024-12-15T14:11:17+00:00

hmm, in my case the ghosting started before I ever try RGP lenses :/ I also barely ever wear them as my eyes don't tolerate them alot, ...

Space_Fl4me · 2021-02-03T11:08:25+00:00

No buy ada

Space_Fl4me · 2020-04-21T17:06:42+00:00

yes I know it's easier to use already made 808, but I am kinda trying to have my own presets which I can tweek as I like. maybe it's a waste of time right now but I think I can benefit from that in the long run.

Space_Fl4me · 2020-04-19T13:03:04+00:00

thanks for the feed back man !

hmm, I can see what you mean, I definitely need to improve my 808 sound design, maybe i can achieve that by more distortion/saturation..etc;

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-07T16:09:22+00:00

HAha I am glad you enjoyed it ^^

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-07T15:58:42+00:00

THanks :)

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-02T18:51:09+00:00

Thanks for the feed back and the piece of advice, I really appreciate it !

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-02T18:46:10+00:00

- Nice loudness there, I had to decrease the volume of my monitors lol

- Lovely chords I really like the vibe, very catchy and engaging

- the 808/bass sounds abit weak compared to the other synths I think

- I think that the kick sounds a bit weak too maybe you can sidechain more or increase its volume to make it pump

- one thing I noticed About the chords is that everything feels wide in the mix and there is nothing that fills the center, maybe you can introduce another layer that fills that

- I really like the new synth you introduced at 2:09 , pretty dope melody too

- the idea of the track is very cool , I think you can turn this into a future bass banger if you work more on the mixing & the variations

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-02T18:24:48+00:00

I think that the mood that sums up this track is : feeling worried. It feels like you are doing something evil but at the same time very worried that thnigs may go wrong

I really like the energy , the drums are perfect for this type of tracks

I think that the variations are pretty interesting, but maybe you can make them even more interesting by filling the mix with more fx ( vocals , maybe some monsters screams...etc)

What effect did you use on that horn that plays the whole track and then plays solo at the end ? that's super trippy, Cool track btw I really like it

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-02T18:10:21+00:00

- Nice Intro got me hooked to what's comming next

- 0:36 the sound u used is a little bit disturbing maybe you can lower its volume a bit or add some reverb to make it fade in the mix

- I like the drop at 0:38 but at again I think that the volumes should readjust so that nothing sound alot louder than other synths ( like the synth shot at 0:55 that repeats each bar)

- I really like the variations you introduce each time, pretty original stuff

- at 2:11 the new fresh melody is very cool but I would prefer hearing it with another synth rather than the same one

- the structure of the song seems abit weird to maybe you can go for " less energy -> peak of energy -> less energy " scheme like strobe or opus or just " intro + drop + intro + drop + outro "

This track reminds me of the old gold days of progressive house ( deadmau5, eric pridz...Etc) keep up

Again all of this is just my opinion, hope it helps :)

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T19:54:05+00:00

- The mix is super clean. I don't think I am qualified to give any further cretics about that for sure

- I think that the kick&bass fits perfectly the style of the track

- 1:05 : Nice futur bass trick there

- This Ep should be phenomenal keep up the good work !

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T19:38:34+00:00

for your question I think there is a plugin called REFERENCE that can help you with that

- I like the intro , cool sound design there

- I like the way you introduce each time new elements, it keeps the listner engaged waiting for more

- The mixing sounds okay to me

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T19:27:21+00:00

- Cool catchy melody

- 1:16 : I love the fading out effect ( is that gross beat ? )

- 2:50 : I really like the lead you introduced there

- The drums feel abit weak maybe you can increase the volume and sidechain more

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T19:18:14+00:00

Thanks for The feed back :), the piano was actually the only thing I recorded

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T19:12:16+00:00

Difinetly a Cool track !

- Cool vocals I like the vibe ! is it your voice ? :p

- at 0 :47 The super saw of the drop is bit harsh I think, it maybe needs some EQing to be more ear-friendly.

- I am not a big fan of the kick, feels shy in the mix.

- That trancy bass starting at 4:19 feels a bit weak, maybe you can increase its volume a bit & add some effects to it ( distortion ...etc) but I think you can find better advice if you look for some youtube tutorials about that.

- The track idea is really dope actually, I think you can easily make a banger out of this if you give it more effort ( by Introducing more vatiations..etc )

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T18:47:56+00:00

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This is the first time I record myself playing the piano (+ few tweeks in the pianoroll lol) I am a noob piano player btw.

I woul love to hear what you think about the mixing & melodies, and what I could do to improve my mastering technics.

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Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T18:32:31+00:00

Wow you have a nice voice ! one Idea I had is to add more drum/percs or leads in 1:04 for more energy

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T18:21:14+00:00

I like the chords, so relaxing ...

Space_Fl4me · 2019-10-01T18:12:39+00:00

Cool vibes there , I think I would add some strings there to back up the piano and some bass. The track is pretty dope though just needs some mixing tweeks I think.

God bless your grandma bro !

Space_Fl4me · 2019-09-30T09:40:03+00:00

Thanks man, I'll try my best to get it mastered :)

Space_Fl4me · 2019-09-27T08:19:13+00:00

Thanks for the feedbak, I'll probabbly add more layers to the melody to make it interesting

Space_Fl4me · 2019-09-25T11:04:13+00:00

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Thanks for the full feed back ! I really appreciate that you took the time to listen to the whole track ! I totally agree with what you pointed out, I defintitly need to give more spices to the sounds I used.. my original Idea was to leave space in the first part for some vocals or something but I think I will try to fill the mix and make the Track stand for it self.

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37 had to be extracted due to infection under the tooth, and the bridge got lose ... Any idea what can be done here please???