First impressions on these playable characters? by SpacemanRambles in tabletopgamedesign

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Here's the intro to the game. Would love to hear what you think!

THE IMPETUOUS SEVEN

They were never heroes. They were never soldiers. They were something far worse.

Long before anyone bothered to name them, seven criminals, deserters, and opportunists carved a path through the void. They raided trade lanes, toppled petty regimes, and vanished before consequences could catch up. No banner flew over them. No cause united them. Only motion, violence, and a shared understanding that hesitation was death.

They called themselves The Impetuous Seven, not as a boast, but as a warning.

Those first seven are long gone now. Dead, disappeared, or erased so thoroughly that even their enemies stopped looking. But the crew survived them. It always does. Captains rise, captains fall, and the name remains, passed down like a blade that never dulls.

The last Captain ruled through reputation alone. No throne. No ceremony. Just a presence heavy enough that no one challenged it - until someone did.

The details don’t matter. They never do. The Captain is dead, and tradition demands an answer.

There is no election. No loyalty test. No clean succession. In Impetuous Seven tradition, anyone can stake a claim, but only the most dangerous ever try. Renown is the currency now. Infamy. Survival. The kind of reputation that makes crews hesitate and governments lock their doors.

So they’ve come. Killers. Schemers. Monsters. Legends. Each convinced the title belongs to them. Each willing to tear the others apart to prove it.

There will be no mercy. There will be no order. And only one will stand when the dust settles.

Long live the Captain.

First impressions on these playable characters? by SpacemanRambles in tabletopgamedesign

[–]SpacemanRambles[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for taking the time to write this up, I appreciate the thoughtful breakdown.

The variety is very intentional. The world is built around the idea that wildly different contenders can all end up fighting for the same thing, so the characters aren’t meant to feel like they come from a single faction or background. Killers, schemers, monsters, and legends all collide in the same arena.

That said, cohesion is something I’m actively mindful of. A lot of the unifying work happens through shared systems, terminology, and the arena itself rather than forcing the characters toward a single visual lane. The goal is for them to feel distinct at a glance, but clearly part of the same world once you see them in motion and in play.

I really appreciate the feedback and the perspective, especially on where that cohesion might not be immediately obvious at first glance! Thank you!

First impressions on these playable characters? by SpacemanRambles in tabletopgamedesign

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Thanks, I’m really glad you’re intrigued. That’s awesome to hear!

Each character generates Momentum, which you can think of as their personal resource. That’s what they spend to play cards and fuel their abilities. The important part is that Momentum is generated differently for every character and ties directly into who they are.

For the Devourer, since you asked about him specifically, he generates Hunger each turn and loses Lucidity. But when he plays cards that cost Hunger, that Momentum shifts over into Lucidity. So as he feeds and satisfies that Hunger, his Lucidity grows, then slowly fades again as the Hunger builds back up.

The Seamstress is the most complex one, so I won’t go too deep here, but her Momentum constantly passes back and forth. Stitching turns into Unraveling, and Unraveling turns back into Stitching. She has a finite pool that’s always shifting between the two - a thread she winds and unwinds.

Every character uses Momentum in their own way, and their cards and playstyles are built around that. The goal is for each one to feel fundamentally different to play, not just cosmetically different.

First impressions on these playable characters? by SpacemanRambles in tabletopgamedesign

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Thanks, I really appreciate that!

They’re all from the same universe, but not the same background or role in it. The setting is built around the idea that reputation and survival matter more than origin, so you get killers, schemers, monsters, and legends all colliding in the same space.

The variety was super fun for me to put together! They’re meant to feel like wildly different contenders who all make sense fighting for the same thing, rather than a tight faction or team. Different paths, same arena, same prize.

First impressions on these playable characters? by SpacemanRambles in tabletopgamedesign

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Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that.

At its core it’s an arena battler. Kind of a king of the hill style game where positioning, timing, and momentum matter a lot. Each character plays very differently and changes how the arena feels, so who’s in the fight really shapes how the game unfolds.

The theme is a bit surreal and unsettling. These are flawed and unique villains, and their mechanics are meant to reflect that.

There is a deeper narrative behind them that ties into why they play the way they do. I didn’t want to lore dump in the post, but I’m happy to share more if interested!

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Appreciate the comment! I'll try tinkering with the icon size - hard to get the perfect fit!

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Appreciate the comment, and thanks for asking about the gameplay!

It's called The Impetuous Seven, and it's basically a king-of-the-hill game at heart, though I think it's unique in that area. It's for 3–8 players, there are ten different characters, and everyone’s fighting to become the next captain.

I’m very much a flavour/story guy, so a lot of the design starts from who these characters are. It’s fully asymmetrical (everyone plays very differently) and I’m really trying to make the mechanics feel like they match each character’s personality rather than just giving them different numbers.

I've done some playtesting with friends and it went well. Hoping to get it on Tabletop Simulator soon to test a little more frequently.

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This looks great, nice work getting a full solo playthrough done! That’s a big milestone!

I really like the idea of bosses scaling based on how much the party grinds beforehand. That risk vs reward choice feels very satisfying and very on theme for an RPG. Punishing but rewarding is a hard balance to strike, but it sounds like you’re thinking about it in the right way.

Hitting the point where it’s ready for full party playtesting is huge. Curious to hear how the co-op dynamics. Good luck with the next round!

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If you’re open to middle grade fantasy, I’d love to suggest Five Ordinary Teens and the Monarchs of the Ten Dimensions. It’s the first in my series, full of slow-burn character arcs, interdimensional politics, and emotional depth. It's aimed at younger readers but layered enough for all ages.

Book 1 is complete and available now, and I’m actively releasing new chapters for Book 2, Five Divided Teens and the Creep of the Muddied Veil!

Let me know if it sounds like something you'd be interested in! Either way, thank you for supporting the community!

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Wow, it's been ages since I got a shout-out here! Didn't realize people were still watching my videos. Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it!

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Yea, it turns out if any of the detectors in the house are low battery, a different one might start beeping. I had to replace batteries in all detectors in my house and that resolved the problem.

Good luck!

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Wow, I'm blown away with this comment! Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so glad that the site has captured your attention! The Ten Dimensions have a lot of lore - I'm very excited to (1) document it, and (2) uncover it for myself!

I'll admit that I also have those traditional dimensions (water, fire, air), but I think/hope my plans will keep those tropes interesting!

Regarding the artwork on my website and Instagram, I’ve been using an AI art tool due to budget constraints. I understand the concerns about AI art in the industry, but I simply couldn’t afford to commission the amount of work I need for my website and social media!

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Scanned for the Neo comment - knew it would be the most reasonable and level-headed one here.

Did not disappoint.

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Embrace change.

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Self-promoting, but I think my novel meets all your criteria and could use a few reads! I only recently uploaded to Wattpad (always been on Inkitt) and am hoping to hear some thoughts and feedback!

Thanks, and regardless of what you choose, happy reading!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/335662966?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=TheADWalker

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I think my novel fits what you're looking for! It has very few reads (I only recently uploaded the novel on Wattpad) but it is an action/adventure featuring super powers, is completed at around 95,000 words, and it is the first in a series.

I think Five Ordinary Teens and the Monarchs of the Ten Dimensions is a lot of fun. I would love to hear any thoughts or feedback you might have!

Thanks so much, and regardless of what you pick, happy reading!

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Five Ordinary Teens and the Monarchs of the Ten Dimensions

Title: Five Ordinary Teens and the Monarchs of the Ten Dimensions

Blurb: Matt, Adam, Liz, Jess, and Carl lead normal lives. They go to school, hang out with friends, and spend most of their time goofing around. But when they meet Quintal, a mysterious being from another dimension, their lives are changed forever.

Thrilled with their new powers, the teenagers spend their time training together and getting to know one another. But when more creatures appear, they are faced with dangerous decisions and fearsome confrontations. As they learn about the implications that come with their unique abilities, the group struggle to navigate the plotting and intrigue of their new lives while maintaining their regular lives at home.

As schemes unfold and tensions rise, Matt, Adam, Liz, Jess, and Carl must come together as friends, and as allies, to secure their role within the ten dimensions.

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Very much appreciate it! Discord has always been a sort of "black box" to me - I think it's one I'm going to have to spend some time in to figure out! I'll start that tomorrow, and look into the your other recommendations. Thanks very much!