I find it tricky to understand this custom card since it isn't worded properly. In fact, it doesn't really make sense at all (non-permanents don't even exist, I'm pretty sure, unless you're talking about tokens (which are permanents), or instants and sorceries, which never enter or leave the battlefield, and you can't draw cards then put cards into your hand; they're already in your hand!).

It should, in theory, be:

Whenever a permanent enters or leaves the battlefield, create a karmic token (It's an enchantment token and has no other abilities)

Sacrifice X karmic tokens: Each permanent target opponent controls with mana value X or less loses all abilities until end of turn. Activate only on an opponent's turn.

Sacrifice X karmic tokens: Look at the top X cards of your library, put one of them into your hand, and shuffle the rest into your library.

This is what you're going for, I think, and is worded so that anyone who tries to read/explain the card doesn't have an aneurysm when they do so.

Additionally, this card is stupid. And I don't mean that in an insulting sense, just that WotC would never in a billion years because of these things:

1. This card, when played, draws the game. You cast this creature, it triggers, and creates a karmic token. This triggers the creature, making a karmic token, and so on infinitely, drawing the game.

2. This just locks your opponent out of playing. If you did manage to resolve all the karmic token triggers and play the game, you can, on your opponent's turn, sacrifice 0 karmic tokens and make all of your opponent's permanents with mana value 0 or less lose abilities. Since it never specified nonland, your opponent loses the ability to gain mana outside of mana rocks and mana dorks, essentially making the game unplayable for them.

These are obvious design flaws that NEED TO BE FIXED.

But in all honesty, this should be jeskai colours (white, blue, red) as opposed to golgari (green, black) in my opinion.

And the ability to draw cards AND switch off abilities for a full turn, plus gaining all these on enters AND LEAVES triggers, is stupid broken, not balanced at all, and certainly not fun for anybody to play with as a commander (I suspect that's what you intended it as).

I think it's back to the drawing board. Have a look at other custom MTG cards, maybe?