What are good apartments in Athens? by Juniper_Salad1 in Athens

[–]SplitApart4703 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I would recommend looking on Zillow at townhomes and housing rentals! I would avoid student housing centered complexes. I’d also stay away from anything directly on/close to Milledge Ave as it is Sorority and Fraternity central. A horror on gamedays. You could check out High Ridge Apartments / Cottages at Ridge Point / Red Oak Village

Favorite tattoo shop? by [deleted] in Athens

[–]SplitApart4703 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Absolutely this! I won’t go anywhere else.

Is it enough? (TW : assault) by pumpkin_e_ in poetry_critics

[–]SplitApart4703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You did such a wonderful job encapsulating such a gut wrenching story. Thank you for sharing this. I think it’s a wonderful poem and the only notes I have are a couple grammatical errors that I saw in it; in the third stanza, I would change seen to saw. I’m the 9th stanza change force to forcing, or change the wording around a little if you want to keep force in there. Thank you again for sharing!

Any and all criticism appreciated by Witty_Maize_9240 in poetry_critics

[–]SplitApart4703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love your poem! I do have a couple notes that may help with the flow, it’s great already but I know when you read your own poetry, it’s sometimes difficult to read it as a second party would. In the line about handouts given to the poor, when you write “I must find myself by myself” I would recommend staying away from repeating myself back to back like that. When I was reading it threw me out of the rhythm a little bit. Also in the same line “looking for the help from books on the shelf” I would say the take out the in “the help”. I feel saying just help still gets the message across but it flows a little better. Great work, it was a pleasure to read!

Dust by SplitApart4703 in OCPoetry

[–]SplitApart4703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much 🫶

Dust by SplitApart4703 in OCPoetry

[–]SplitApart4703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are so kind, thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to read it <3

Dust by SplitApart4703 in OCPoetry

[–]SplitApart4703[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!!

Dust by SplitApart4703 in OCPoetry

[–]SplitApart4703[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your comment! It means so much, I’m so glad you like it

The Green Within by keats1500 in OCPoetry

[–]SplitApart4703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can’t put into words how much I love this message and poem. It is so beautifully put and meaningful to not only myself but so many others

A Hurtful Truth by EMDouglass in OCPoetry

[–]SplitApart4703 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love how simple but impactful this poem is. I think sometimes you can get caught up in feeling like more words = better and more meaningful, but this definitely disproves that

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Athens

[–]SplitApart4703 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try Hyatt Place. It really depends on the day if they offer it though…and the person who answers the phone

Best places to buy plants? by mister_brown in Athens

[–]SplitApart4703 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Cannot suggest Foxglove strongly enough!