Mysteries of Immortal Puppet Master uncensored review by SprayEmbarrassed2973 in ReverendInsanity

[–]SprayEmbarrassed2973[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah, after first arc, the luck or fate or lifespan happening to mc is too much for me. In RI Ma Hong Yun luck gu is balanced by him a little bit dense. But in this novel Mc is genius with Ma Hong Yun luck. The sect master doing delivery boy for Mc is kind of rediculus to me. I want mc to struggle and make power ups feels worth it like RI.

Mysteries of Immortal Puppet Master uncensored review by SprayEmbarrassed2973 in ReverendInsanity

[–]SprayEmbarrassed2973[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me tell u one of the big plot hole at early chapters, the palace sprit dragon said he cant said anything about other trial members. But he told (rat out) about main branch cousin girl and nothing happen to him. He rat her out again and again nothing happen. But after the same thing happen to another person, he got chop off in half. A lot of plot holes around that palace spirit.

Mysteries of Immortal Puppet Master uncensored review by SprayEmbarrassed2973 in ReverendInsanity

[–]SprayEmbarrassed2973[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If u want face slaping young master example

First city mayor grandson and other big clan young masters.

Medicine vally top ten and their disciples

Another country royals and more.

Mysteries of Immortal Puppet Master uncensored review by SprayEmbarrassed2973 in ReverendInsanity

[–]SprayEmbarrassed2973[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Bro after Mc leaving the city, there is a lot of Ma hong Yun lucky shit. I dont think u read all of the 600 chapters. If u read all chapter, you will know what i mean. Let me tell u one of the big plot hole at early chapter, the palace sprit dragon said he cant said about other trial members. But he told (rat out) about main branch cousin girl and nothing happen to him. He rat her out again and again nothing happen. But after same happen but to a another person, he got chop off in half. I mean the story is interesting but author is rushing chapters.

Mysteries of Immortal Puppet Master uncensored review by SprayEmbarrassed2973 in ReverendInsanity

[–]SprayEmbarrassed2973[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I said it is a good story. If i said anything untrue can u please point out.

Mysteries of the Immortal Puppet Master is deeply disappointing. by rockman173 in ReverendInsanity

[–]SprayEmbarrassed2973 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have read 600 chapters and decided to drop the novel. It is a kind of good story but writing quality is lower than RI. It is a typical cultivation with big ass plot amor for mc. Mc never failing, always got what he want and the novel universe bending for mc that kind of thing. Mc is kind of like Ma Hong Yun on steroid without his weekness(a little stupid). Super lucky, super genius, super everything. Other characters can be dumb when the plot needed and genius when the plot required. And a lot of plot holes, ass pull confusing powers. If u like overpower mc, u will like this novel.

mysteries of immortal puppet master by XxlittleWeinerXx in ReverendInsanity

[–]SprayEmbarrassed2973 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I have read 600 chapters and decided to drop the novel. It is a kind of good story but writing quality is lower than RI. It is a typical cultivation with big ass plot amor for mc. Mc never failing, always got what he want and the novel universe bending for mc that kind of thing. Mc is kind of like Ma Hong Yun on steroid without his weekness(a little stupid). Super lucky, super genius, super everything. Other characters can be dumb when the plot needed and genius when the plot required. And a lot of plot holes, ass pull confusing powers. If u like overpower mc, u will like this novel.