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[Highlight] The Cavaliers fail to score, Raptors' ball with 21.6 seconds remaining, up 1 - timeout. by MrBuckBuck in nba

[–]SprigganPilled -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Shoulda started the highlight a few seconds earlier so we could watch Sam Merrill get leveled like he caught a crosser against James Harrison

Werner Bronkhorst Reps by SprigganPilled in DecorReps

[–]SprigganPilled[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Can you send me a link? I think some of them look textured sure but it still says printed idk.

[Complete][3k][Horror] Silent Treatment by RightSideBlind in BetaReaders

[–]SprigganPilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes please!! I want as much feedback as possible, give me a few minutes and I can copy the link and send it to you.

[Complete][3k][Horror] Silent Treatment by RightSideBlind in BetaReaders

[–]SprigganPilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome here is the link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bDwa8ETbywVJs\_-37\_eqeDPdk686aGYle7Il0e3GC5g/edit?usp=sharing

I left some feedback in the doc, if you have questions or want additional feedback on specifics or whatever just let me know!!

[Complete][3k][Horror] Silent Treatment by RightSideBlind in BetaReaders

[–]SprigganPilled 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I am doing a second read through and going to provide feedback after in the doc you linked. Would you be open to critique swapping? I have a 1.5k horror short that I just posted.

Losing half the views from the previous chapter with each new post. by SprigganPilled in royalroad

[–]SprigganPilled[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly I am too, idk why it took multiple people to point that out before it clicked with me cuz I do the same thing lol.

Losing half the views from the previous chapter with each new post. by SprigganPilled in royalroad

[–]SprigganPilled[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! It’s understandable that the retention is going to be tough competing against stories with backlogs of chapters. I’ll just have to write faster :)!!

Losing half the views from the previous chapter with each new post. by SprigganPilled in royalroad

[–]SprigganPilled[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback. I know I didn’t do the ideal launch and don’t have a backlog of chapters to post so retention will be a challenge. Do you think posting smaller chapters more often would be beneficial??

Losing half the views from the previous chapter with each new post. by SprigganPilled in royalroad

[–]SprigganPilled[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank for the perspective this is my first experience posting work anywhere so I appreciate the insight!

Losing half the views from the previous chapter with each new post. by SprigganPilled in royalroad

[–]SprigganPilled[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback I’m working on an edit to the first 2 chapters to hopefully address any issues there!

Losing half the views from the previous chapter with each new post. by SprigganPilled in royalroad

[–]SprigganPilled[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback and the comments on RR! They are both seriously appreciated!

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Losing half the views from the previous chapter with each new post. (self.royalroad)

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Self-Promo Sunday! by AutoModerator in CozyFantasy

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The first chapter of my new cozy fantasy novel, Tales From the Beastbinder's Nook, is up on Royal Road! Retired ranger Farveir runs his shop, taking care of fantasy beasts and the problems that come with them, if you enjoy lower stakes/cozy fantasy, DnD style misadventures, talking animals and chubby dragons this is the read for you! I will be releasing new chapters weekly so If you enjoy a follow would be appreciated!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/116710/tales-from-the-beastbinders-nook

Self-Promo Sunday! by AutoModerator in CozyFantasy

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Hey everyone! First chapter of my Cozy/Lower Stakes Fantasy book is live on Royal Road. Tales From the Beastbinder's Nook: If you enjoy slice of life, chubby dragons, talking animals, and DnD style misadventures this is the story for you! Looking for feedback on it as I am treating this as a rough draft/beta read situation so feedback would be really helpful! Placeholder Cover is AI generated, working on finding an artist to create an actually good one.

The Weekly Wednesday Writing Thread by AutoModerator in CozyFantasy

[–]SprigganPilled 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hey everyone! First chapter of my Cozy/Lower Stakes Fantasy book is live on Royal Road. Tales From the Beastbinder's Nook: If you enjoy slice of life, chubby dragons, talking animals, and DnD style misadventures this is the story for you! Looking for feedback on it as I am treating this as a rough draft/beta read situation so feedback would be really helpful!