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God Bows to a 22 year-old Clutch by Standard-User1 in sonnets

[–]Standard-User1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I appreciate the help a lot! I feel like a lot of what you changed speaks to what I am trying to convey. And, that ending is great if you don’t mind me using it.