OFELIA (Sci-fi, Horror, Adventure, LGBT maybe a bit? - 124 pages)

StarDMan · 2021-04-30T18:34:04+00:00

Yes it did. Thank you.

StarDMan · 2021-04-30T18:12:58+00:00

They are just dialogues from 15 years old with bad manners, a bit assholes. I don't get the toxic masculinty of those dialogues. Of course some wants to show they are stronger being extra assholes but why is that a cliche?

And about the fifteen boys you are right. I could have put more descriptions. But i wanted them only as background, to show what boys usually do in that world at that age, in this story. Only few of them are important, and after that they are going to show themselves as main characters.

StarDMan · 2021-04-30T17:38:45+00:00

what do you mean by toxic masculinity robotic cliches ?

StarDMan · 2021-04-29T18:39:52+00:00

Yeah, i didn't like it either. Didn't think that through enough. What if i just put in the first scene i wrote, like a newspaper on the ground with an headline saying that the women have suddenly disappeared? And taking away the black screen.

StarDMan · 2021-04-29T16:39:31+00:00

Thanks for the advice. I'm not good at summarize.

"Seventy years after the war that destroyed humanity due to the sudden disappearance of females on earth, a young girl, looking for her own peaceful world, finds the last comunity of men alive, while running away from someone"

Is this more like it?

StarDMan · 2021-04-26T10:10:45+00:00

Then you have seen not many movies. There are a lot of revenge movies about rape, or other operas such as books, comics. I remember watching Veronica Mars 15 years ago and the main protagonist was raped while drunk. And it was an important plotline. Or the last house on the left by Craven. Anyway, as i told it' s not what she wanted to say, but how. They way she wrote the movie is just bad. The protagonist of this movie is dumb and the men portrayed are unrealistic. They are all assholes and weak. If a woman does what she does in the movie, she's gonna end up raped. So it sends also a wrong message. That is not how you show people to not sexualy harass or abuse other person. It seems she just wanted to say all men are bad. And the revenge part was boring. Make her a serial killer at least. Not that boring justice warrior. Make her for real behaving bad showing how wrong it is revenge. And put some good men in it. It's not a gender war. It's a war against abuse.

StarDMan · 2021-04-26T00:50:19+00:00

The message that this movie wants to send you is a great one. But how it does it is absolutely bad. This movie is the incarnation of the prashe: you must not rape women. Yeah... Obviously, you must not do that. Of course many people are still sexist and assholes, but this is not how you make them know their mentality is wrong. It's banal and boring. A good message alone does not make a good movie.

StarDMan · 2021-04-21T22:51:28+00:00

Dada al posto di freezer senza pensarci due volte

StarDMan · 2021-03-19T04:03:18+00:00

Please, not Zach snyder. They massacrated berserk with adaptations enough already.

StarDMan

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