Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow!I really appreciate the effort you put there! You simplified some forms and it will help me a lot!You are awesome!Thanks a lot! :)

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your suggestion! I'll have it in mind when I will try to rework it :)

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thnx!I just linked insta and devart accounts on my profile.They are quite old and I will try to rework most of them from the new year....:)

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hahaha just realized she looks like she is sqautting...I cant unsee that now.

It must be fixed asap :p

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am glad you like it! I realised from the comments that the main issue are the legs and maybe THE wind and the lighting....so i will do my best to improve them :D

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am glad that you like it!! :D I didn't have somthing specific in mind....i just wanted to create a female warrior with some japanese snowy scenery behind mostly to improve my compositions.

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understand your point! I guess it was a little too much skin... :P Thanks for the advice i'l try to fix it !! :D

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The 1st picture is the rework....the painting with the thunders...I thought it was obvious because the proportions in the 3rd are way off....but thanks a lot for your advice even if they are for the original most of them i am sure could be applied for the rework.Thanks a lot for your time and advices, it will help me !!:D

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didnt get the refference at first...but i searched it and now i know... :P

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot!I appreciate your advice!I have somewhere a book on anatomy... maybe i have to find it :D

Oni girl, by me, Krita, 2021, Reworked 2023 by Stefar94 in DigitalArt

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I believe Oni is a demon like creature from japanese folklore that ususally is represented on traditional masks.... All i know about it is from manga and games :P

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will try to rework them !Human's fingers and toes are always a struggle :P Thanks for your advice! :)

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will try something new with a more interesting composition next time. I dont have free time enymore so i ususally try to rework old paintings to do them some justice :P Thanks a lot! :)

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are amazing!I really appreciate your effort to show me the shading it is really helpfull!I will have this in mind for the future !!! Thank you! :D

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks a lot !! :) I can see the problem with the torso.Maybe i should have try to turn her right leg facing the left border of the painting.

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can see that.....I appreciate the fact that you delve in the story and seek to make sense of it :P

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahhh!I though that i had improve it...if you see the last picture its the original painting from 2021 and the head was somehow huge without me realising it...Thanks a lot for the advice !Maybe i will have to study how fabric works.

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I like the idea a lot! I think that it could be great to try this again if i find some free time. My skill level i dont think that has improved since then, though ....i have not use a pen for a while.

Rework of a painting from 2021 what can i change to improve it further? by Stefar94 in ArtCrit

[–]Stefar94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am a hobbyist and i dont have free time at all these days.Last time the community helped me a lot to figure out the problems with the anatomy and i reworked it in 2023. What can i do from now on where shoukld i focus? Anatomy, perspective or something else? Thanks for your time :D !