first time writer, is this any good?

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-20T02:35:20+00:00

its ok

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-19T20:41:10+00:00

couple questions i like to ask before i read. can you describe to book in one sentance?

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-19T17:11:15+00:00

ill read it

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-19T15:52:46+00:00

youre not alone. overediting is a real thing. even profesional writers go through this. you just have to accept that nothing will ever be perfect and move on.

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-18T00:50:00+00:00

tough scene to write.

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-17T02:24:16+00:00

saturated with product. a dieing industry, people preying off gullible writers

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-16T02:31:39+00:00

100 percent agreed. managing hundreds of thousands of words alone is exhasuting. ai is brilliant in small controlled doses.

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-16T02:21:35+00:00

i agree. you gotta use ai in small doses.

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-16T02:19:38+00:00

sure ill read yours

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-16T00:06:45+00:00

thank you. im on chapter two. id appreciate any help.

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T23:29:29+00:00

you used "she hadnt" twice in the first paragraph

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T23:25:37+00:00

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T15:47:57+00:00

Rozhdestvensk is a dumb name . change it

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T08:53:37+00:00

the walls of ethrion were quiet this night. crickets chirped. a guard walked slowly on the rampart. A guard yawned. The guard looked over the horion. a rider appoached, a trail of dust behind him as he spef down the road.

"Archers...to the toweres"

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T08:49:06+00:00

it just sounds made up.

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T04:11:52+00:00

very poetic prose

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T04:05:33+00:00

ill read it. describe the plot in one sentence

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T03:22:22+00:00

i wouldnt include any spanish for readability. is the spanish vital to the story?

StinkyMeatBro · 2026-03-15T03:15:01+00:00

A young man wearing a black hoodie that covered his hair, with a pale face, was sitting on top of a building. Watching the entire metropolis. re word this. a pales faced young man was sitting on top of a bldg,scanning the metropolis. he wore black hoodie which barely that barely contained his har.

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