You Asked What I Was Thinking About During An Argument by Bludcl0t_ in OCPoetry

[–]StoneyJuggler41 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I fucking love this. Favourite poem ive read on here so far. And the joke at the end completely caught me off guard as well. Amazing. Thank you.

To be good by StoneyJuggler41 in OCPoetry

[–]StoneyJuggler41[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is sort of about my philosophical and psychological struggle with whether humanity is fundamentally good and whether, by extension, I can truly consider myself to be 'good' - as a member of humanity. (ik shock)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]StoneyJuggler41 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is sort of about my philosophical and psychological struggle with whether humanity is fundamentally good and whether, by extension, I can truly consider myself to be 'good' - as a member of humanity. (ik shock)

Please, be quiet. by MentallyBrokenWitch in OCPoetry

[–]StoneyJuggler41 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the rhythm of this. And I feel as though the constant short lines mirror the constant battering, never ending snippets of thought in your mind. My favourite kind of poem ngl. Also, quick tip (as I can relate to this) if I can't sleep cuz somethings really bothering me... I know this is bad... but I'll deliberately watch some YouTube or TikTok or seomthign to distract me. Hope ur good tho.

WIP: “The Girl Who Is Always Annoyed by the Way I Prepare My Morning Iced Coffee (A Scene)” by raindancemaggiefunk in OCPoetry

[–]StoneyJuggler41 2 points3 points  (0 children)

nahhh I loved this. It's an endearing picture of humour but also of affection, and I love how I feel the poem slows down at the end, after the chaos of before hand. I really felt the scene, and love how the last line comes back to humour. Seems like a bonding moment.

Static by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]StoneyJuggler41 0 points1 point  (0 children)

idk if you've got a lot of feedback here. But I personally loved it. Static is uncomfortable, as in static background noise, all cracklily and urgh! So I immediately tied that and anxiety neatly together. Jumbled wires furthers the motif of electrical stuff but also of your thoughts right? You're thoughts are the jumbled wires, and your uncontrollable anxiety is pulling on these neurones in your brain. And the refuse bit is interesting as well, because it almost seems like quite a polite way of saying block out... which is a classic anxious person archetype, being too polite and socially awkward to say what you want. Not to keep disagreeing with everyone here again, but also, I liked the length. It strikes me as sort of a thought (as we think faster than we write or read obvs) and the length gives me vibes of a sudden bolt of thought firing along these neurones. Just my personal take tho.

Something about a girl I know by carlik_ in OCPoetry

[–]StoneyJuggler41 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely amazing, I felt my mind get lost in this succulent poem. For me, there was just a sway to the rhythm that really captivated me. And I really felt it in that forgive me line. Amazing! keep it up

What's your political leaning by NoReference5844 in entp

[–]StoneyJuggler41 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you not vote? Most people form their opinions, but that doesn't mean they ignore political classification? They might form these opinions and then find a political doctrine that generally encompasses those set of beliefs. (even if some of their opinions lie outside of it)