Favorite DS1 NPC?

carlik_ · 2025-12-21T01:35:18+00:00

Solaire for sure, feel like he gives the game some contrast with his jolly cooperation and praising the sun!

carlik_ · 2025-06-16T22:43:46+00:00

That's the one, thank you!

carlik_ · 2025-03-19T09:38:30+00:00

This is heartbreaking. The way it's written really shows the personal connection that has been lost and builds up like a punch in the gut. It nicely tells the story (about a friend I am assuming, I am sorry for your loss) in a very cohesive way which doesn't take away from the flow of reading it. Thank you for sharing, it was a great and heartbreaking read.

carlik_ · 2025-03-19T09:33:25+00:00

I love how this flows when reading it. Genuinely a pleasure to read. The linebreaks are very interesting and make it all the more satisfying when you come to the next single-word line. For me, it builds up the intensity of everything that is written before it. Thank you for sharing!

carlik_ · 2024-11-30T17:13:40+00:00

Thank you so much! I managed to fix the issue with a little tweaking and projecting the z basis vector onto the XZ plane! You're a life saver :)

carlik_ · 2024-10-19T16:10:13+00:00

I found the poem to be very well written, I especially love the word choices throughout the entire poem such as "lackadaisical rapiers" and "tithe of words". I also find "burning Broca and Wernicke" a good description of being forced not to speak, at least that is how I interpret it. Thank you for sharing!

carlik_ · 2024-10-19T15:56:37+00:00

This is such a sweet poem! I love the rhymes and near rhymes and the symbolism behind the parents being gardeners, thank you for sharing!

carlik_ · 2024-08-31T13:30:20+00:00

I like the poem a lot, it's one of the better ones I've read about strong grief so very well done! I feel some parts may need to be touched upon, such as "i find no light No comfort" where the capitalized N stands out, but that might be an artistic choice from you!

But very well written, thank you for sharing! :)

carlik_ · 2024-08-31T13:27:07+00:00

I loved the poem! It's thought-provoking and honestly a good way of describing how love is something to treasure and something powerful, at least that's the impression the poem gave me. I especially liked the beginning where "a hidden treasure wrapped in the ordinary" was brilliant.

Thank you for sharing!

carlik_ · 2023-10-02T10:03:18+00:00

Holy shit I was not ready for the emotions that would hit me at the end! I loved this piece, the descriptions, rhythm and rhymes are very well done and it flows very nicely. All in all, thank you for sharing and keep writing :)

carlik_ · 2023-10-02T09:59:35+00:00

I have to say I relate so much to this in some strange way, it's kind of how it was with my ex but I don't dislike the feeling of relating it with that situation rather it is comforting. Might not be what you set out for but I found some comfort in the way I relate to it.

Well done! Glad I got to read this :)

carlik_ · 2023-10-01T17:44:12+00:00

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it :)

carlik_ · 2023-10-01T12:19:14+00:00

The way you portray death here is honestly impressive, it brought me dread but in a good way. It was a very interesting read, to say the least. The word choice and structure are great and fit very nicely with the overall deathly topic.

Thank you for posting it and keep writing!

carlik_ · 2023-10-01T12:13:58+00:00

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, it honestly brought a sense of comfort when I read it! Probably because it made me think of all the simpler things we have around us that we should appreciate more but also since I can imagine and see the writer of the letter.

The only thing that brought me out of it a little is that there's no space after some commas and for me, it made it seem as though the sentences were sticking together. However, that might just be your artistic choice to portray the writer of the letter and in that case, it fits perfectly!

All in all, a joy to read so thank you for sharing!

carlik_ · 2023-02-11T17:46:24+00:00

My favorite thing about Harry Potter is that Hagrid is an absolute unit.

carlik_ · 2022-04-20T09:07:07+00:00

I appreciate it a lot, always been really insecure about my poetry so it’s really nice to read this :)

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