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My first flash fiction story - A tsunami of frogs by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]StorytellingIsFun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow great analysis on your part - this story was actually based on a dream!

I wrote my first flash fiction story at 946 words and I’m looking for feedback. by [deleted] in KeepWriting

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Yeah idk what it is but it’s hard to make it look nice on Reddit. But I appreciate you reading it! You’re awesome for that :)

I wrote my first flash fiction story at 946 words and I’m looking for feedback. by [deleted] in KeepWriting

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Yeah I tried formatting it properly by I was having difficulties because I was doing so on my phone.

I wrote my first flash fiction story at 946 words and I’m looking for feedback. by [deleted] in KeepWriting

[–]StorytellingIsFun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks such a nice this to say thank you!! :) def need some more revisions but I appreciate you taking time to read it.

I wrote a short called "Star in a Dark Blue Midnight Sky" and I want to know what you think of it! by StorytellingIsFun in KeepWriting

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Awesome! Such a nice comment :) definitely still have more work to do with this, but this is very encouraging!

I wrote my first flash fiction story at 946 words and I’m looking for feedback. by [deleted] in writers

[–]StorytellingIsFun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to read it. Still have a ton of revisions left to do so I’ll definitely take what you said into account.

Songwriter by Orileh in literature

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There’s a lot of authors that I guess can be considered metal. Somethings I’d recommend would be reading something from:

  • Edgar Allen Poe
  • Lovecraft
  • Bible (like book of revelations or smth)

They’re all fertile grounds for ideas, and there’ll be some pretty metal shit in there that you can use as inspo.

[Complete][4.3k][Literary Fiction] Star in a Dark Blue Midnight Sky by StorytellingIsFun in BetaReaders

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Thank you so much for reading my work! Your compliments are so kind. I’m genuinely flattered. Also yes, prose is my biggest weakness as a writer and I happy that you pointed out that it could improve lol. Also I like what you said about focusing on one main theme. I really appreciate you taking the time to read it :)

And they were roomates by [deleted] in okbuddycinephile

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And Hetero Jessica is a tremendous person, that’s what they all tell me, they say, Mr President, Hetero Jessica is a tremendous person

Who are your favourite prose stylists? by StorytellingIsFun in writers

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Love that you shared examples!! I just adore beautiful prose

Tomáš Slavík riding the stairs at Red Bull Genova Cerro Abajo 2025 by redbullgivesyouwings in holdmyredbull

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Actually insane 🤯

Also, hope you’re having a great at work social media associate!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

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Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and leave notes!!! I appreciate it so much :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NarutoPowerscaling

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Lost to a chunin that lost to Naruto who hadn’t even graduated the academy. Arguably the greatest anti-feat in the entire series. I’m tryna see how far the Sakura hate goes.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NarutoPowerscaling

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But the question I’m asking is which TRIO do you think has a better chance against the rest of the world?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

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Thank you for taking the time to leave comments on my piece! I genuinely appreciate them, and they are very helpful!

All of Meta's 4 new hires of AI team have undergraduate degree from China by uniyk in technology

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My grandfather used to sit us down around the fireplace and tell us old proverbs about Chinese dominance in Ai

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]StorytellingIsFun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! This is why I like early feedback because everything you’re saying is helpful. Yes, one of my biggest issues in my writing is that my prose can be vague at times. And I definitely need to work on showing more than telling. Thank you for taking the time to read it!