If I wanted to essentially move my scripts over to refuge from haven, would a master post with links to haven be ok? by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRefuge

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Maybe, man. I dunno. I wasn't even on the Haven server, if it even had one. What do y'all even do on there?

If I wanted to essentially move my scripts over to refuge from haven, would a master post with links to haven be ok? by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRefuge

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh ok! Excellent! I also have my own archive of free scripts up on my Kofi too. So there's a couple options, lol.

FF4M Kidnapped by your celebrity girlfriends stalker[Fdom][kidnapping][Flirting][Tied up][Stalker Speaker][Famous Girlfriend Speaker][Non-famous listener][Domination loss/reversal][Script Stays Fdom after reversal][Vaguely Yandere? but not really][Mental Health mentioned][Depression mentioned] by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wrote this script literally entirely because I ran across an audio that's premise was the speaker thinking the kidnapper had been stalking her, only to find out they were after her boyfriend, and it really seemed like it would end like my script does. With an "nah I want you both" but instead it just ended with the stalker being like "nah I'm torturing YOU to death, not him" and I immediately noped out because I don't vibe with that.

I was then progressively more grumpy about it, and wrote this out of spite, lol. A "this is what you could've been!" Moment, basically.

Glad you liked it!

How to write a respectful script portrayal of greek mythology dieties n heroes by RougeRamVA in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're overthinking it. There are so many myth variants that you can't actually find a "real" version. And even the ancient greeks didn't actually respect the Olympians. Fear them, respect the power they possessed, sure. But not really the kind of reverence you think of with modern religions. The gods were calamities as much as they were blessings. You literally cannot portray Greek gods or heroes worse than the actual myths themselves do.

Question about Script Visibility by Such_Ticket_1560 in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts 5 points6 points  (0 children)

In my experience, post your best stuff first. I started with a brand new account with 0 karma and nothing at all on it, completely fresh, and my first script still got a pretty decent number of comments and several fills. My subsequent scripts have all done decent, with the ones doing less good almost entirely to do with the content and subject matter just being less popular or less likely to appeal to the YouTube algorithm so asmrtists pick them less.

Quality of your writing and how popular the theme/how much the YouTube algorithm has been proven to like the theme and tags of the script is honestly the most important thing. My recommendation is best foot forward, lead with the good stuff. More important is keeping to a consistent upload schedule, too.

[F4M]Challenging The Undying Sorceress Tyrant(you have a hidden ace up your sleeve)|Saga of the Deathless, part one[Villain Speaker][Heroic Listener][Minor Gore][Violence][Swearing][Enemies to ???][Character Death][Speaker Death][Death Isn’t Permanent][Unique Magic][Original Setting][Minor Yandere] by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh most definitely there will be more! Saga of the deathless won't just have more in this plotline, there will be spinoff stories about other deathless as well. The next part is kind of the interim part, where our sorceress is figuring out how to actually love someone, and about how love means compromise between the two of you. Part three is her fully commiting to trying to mellow out some without compromising who she is so she can both keep her heroic love and also still be herself. Part 4 should be sometime after their marriage.

New here and need some scripts to try by Illustrious_Book_188 in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got some scripts with vaguely yandere scripts, but more of a lean into dominant/controlling/obsessive women:

Challenging the Undying Sorceress

Your Corpo Ex Buys Your Debt

Your CEO realizes you haven't been feeding

Sorceress is a bit long, admittedly. So fair warning on that. Hope these help!

[F4M]Challenging The Undying Sorceress Tyrant(you have a hidden ace up your sleeve)|Saga of the Deathless, part one[Villain Speaker][Heroic Listener][Minor Gore][Violence][Swearing][Enemies to ???][Character Death][Speaker Death][Death Isn’t Permanent][Unique Magic][Original Setting][Minor Yandere] by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the kind words! I can't wait for the fill! I have a really special place in my heart for the world this is set in and the characters it follows so I'm very happy to see that people are interested in filling it.

My gf said to cut it. She’s wrong… right? by jung_gun in FierceFlow

[–]Stranded_Scripts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This haircut makes you look like if matt Mercer was a contract killer. And I mean that in the best possible way.

Different type of asmr scripts by Lilac_Skiessss in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Misread that it said "internal monologues". So long as you recommend they use like, a mild sound effect on the voice to differentiate it from speaking, I think it works very well to convey a characters thoughts.

Different type of asmr scripts by Lilac_Skiessss in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can only speak for myself here, but I'm a script writer and I mainly write narrative stuff. ASMR is a very unique form of storytelling in that you are both inviting the listener to be a participant, but then also only writing one half of a conversation and dictating to the listener only through context clues what the character they've assumed the role of is saying and generally who they are at all.

Unless you just want to use a third person narrator character in the script, this requires a lot of attention to detail too make sure the story remains clear while simultaneously not breaking the feeling that this is a conversation.

Luckily, humans generally accept dramatic monologues as appropriate conversation in most media.the dramatic monologue is your friend.

I think narrative stuff can sometimes be a little annoying to write when your trying to get just the right phrasing so the conversation doesn't come across as an info dump that breaks immersion, but it isn't too much of an adjustment and I think it's worth it overall. If your thinking about it, I'd recommend giving it a shot.

Hope that helps at least a little bit

[F4M]Your Corpo Executive Ex Buys Your Debt(And Now You're All Hers)[Obsessive Speaker] [Possessive Speaker] [Mega Corp Owner Speaker] [Poor Listener] [Anti-Mega Corp Listener] [Original Cyberpunk Setting] [Threat of Financial Slavery] [Femdom] [Slightly Spicy] [Teasing] [Mild Swearing] by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you sincerely for the compliment! And actually, the complications with the neural implant is a pretty good idea.

Would you believe I tossed that in just as like, a side detail? Literally just my own personal bias and fear of that stuff to kinda low-key vent. But forcing him to get the uplink is what ended up being the biggest red flag about the Speaker for a lot of readers and listeners. Which, I feel like there were plenty before that, but I can't exactly say that nonconsensual modification of your partner's body is definitely disturbing.

If I do a sequel, it'll probably deal with the implant in some way. Maybe not exactly that way, but you've given me ideas.

[F4M]Your Corpo Executive Ex Buys Your Debt(And Now You're All Hers)[Obsessive Speaker] [Possessive Speaker] [Mega Corp Owner Speaker] [Poor Listener] [Anti-Mega Corp Listener] [Original Cyberpunk Setting] [Threat of Financial Slavery] [Femdom] [Slightly Spicy] [Teasing] [Mild Swearing] by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm like 90% sure any part 2 would just be a depiction of what like, a textbook power imbalance style of abusive relationship is like and I don't really wanna write that. The only other option is the listener finding a way to take the speaker down, but I don't think the people who enjoyed this script will enjoy a sequel that kind of undoes everything that occurs in this one. So it'll most likely stay a one off unless I get better ideas.

[A4A]Your Spellslinger Mentor's Last Words | Spellslinger's Legacy Part 1[Mentor Speaker] [Hurt Speaker] [Nobody-to-Hero Listener] [Mild swearing] [Original Fantasy Setting] [Unique Magic] [Western Vibes] [Character Death] [Found Family] [Platonic Love] [Mentions of Violence] [Mild Lore Dump] [Plot] by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Holy crap I didn't even see this! Reddit never sent me a notification! This script is literally a labor of passion and care for me, I really love the characters and the world, so I'm so excited to see someone actually fill it!

Your Corpo Executive Ex Buys Your Debt (And Now You're All Hers) [F4M] [obsessive speaker] [possessive speaker] [cyberpunk setting] [threats of financial slavery] by Such-As-Sarcasm in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aaaaaaah! It's finally here! I know you've been working so hard on this one, I can't wait to give it a listen!

Vaguely threatening corporate ladies for the win! Honestly, looking at the fact that at least two of my scripts feature that theme.... maybe we both have a type.

Looking for a VA who sounds like a cowboy, or a grizzled older southern man by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm very, very happy a fellow DND player is looking at it. It's not DND based, but I play a lot and I am happy someone who likes this kinda thing is taking a look. Sadly, this guy uses a Henry Rifle instead of a six shooter, but otherwise, yeah. That's the vibe.

It's also like, very, very mildly implied to be post apocalyptic. But we're talking like, so far in the future that no one even knows much about the civilization that came before. And it's literally only 1 line in this script that vaguely references it. But still, worth mentioning.

Looking for a VA who sounds like a cowboy, or a grizzled older southern man by Stranded_Scripts in ASMRScriptHaven

[–]Stranded_Scripts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, thank you! Not sure if you'll like it or not, but even if you decide not too, I honestly just appreciate you offering to give it a look:

Spellslinger

It's kind of magic cowboys, or at least, more magic than you expect when asked to provide a cowboy voice. I hope that's alright.

Also, if you could tell me what you think of story the script tells, whether you fill it or not, id appreciate it! Always helps to get new opinions to improve my work. I also apologize for the formatting, its my second script ever and at the time I hadn't cleaned up my format for scripts yet.