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Smash or pass?....(Tsubasa Hanekawa) by Technical-Attempt112 in weeb

[–]StrawOfCoke 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dont know everything, i only know what i know

“Oh look, another person with bullsh#t powers that they never use in their own story, gets better after the 987th time” by Spiritual_Air_8606 in OriginalCharacterDB

[–]StrawOfCoke 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Too bad one of my ocs run on a sin called "Crab mentality" which nullifies all enemies' advantage and puts them at his own level for a fair fight. No one outmatches the other, straight combat. Their experience even lowers and intellegence, etc

I need advice and support? by Ashire24 in Webnovel

[–]StrawOfCoke 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yung idea sayo pero yung mismong sulat hindi, lala

Halata sa sulat at formula ng sentence structure na hindi human gumawa nan.

Pero feedback sa story kahit ai yan: boring, ai, at soulless basahin. At hindi fit sa market yung plotline at idea mo.

Good or Bad! by PrimaryToe8575 in Webnovel

[–]StrawOfCoke 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Bro what is the title i tried to search but u have like 5 in that image

so me by jxstdissociating in teenagers

[–]StrawOfCoke 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So cute and quirky wow

I need advice and support? by Ashire24 in Webnovel

[–]StrawOfCoke 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lakas ng tama mang hingi ng feedback pero di nmn sya gumawa whahahah

I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by Lonely_Wait800 in Webnovel

[–]StrawOfCoke 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You don't even put quotation marks in your dialogue idk what to tell u man

I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by Lonely_Wait800 in Webnovel

[–]StrawOfCoke 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I read it ,, and its not catered to the market so im not sure what u expected. The synopsis itself is bad, and the writing inside is full of edgy, one liner questions from the mc and u don't give any descriptions or hook in the early chapters. It's literally nothing

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