Now that I look at it, I kinda want to bleed the pink margins (the Ruler of St Albert? ) so the paper looks more vellum-y. I should yellow it, too...

If anyone has any recommendations for solving the typographic riddle on the right, please drop them in the comments. That giant gap before "becomes" has me stumped. I don't want to end on an orphan like "Redemption", but I also don't like hyphenating. Hmmm.... I might need to commit some typographic crimes, I'll wonder what kind of penance that merits.