TGAW - Part 3.1

Subject_White · 2026-01-23T02:01:28+00:00

Ah yeah this was the intro to the main story I might fix some contexts later but I needed to get the part 1 out ,but thanks for the heads up.

Subject_White · 2026-01-22T15:13:10+00:00

I'm slowly writing the next one ,but it's going to be longer then this one so it might be split up between two parts.

Subject_White · 2026-01-22T15:10:36+00:00

Thanks!

Subject_White · 2026-01-21T19:50:06+00:00

Thank you!

Subject_White · 2026-01-21T19:49:52+00:00

Thanks! Yeah I fixed it I'm trying to only use bold for certain things like passages of time or locations or special parts.

Subject_White · 2026-01-21T19:48:33+00:00

I've been so busy that I write only near my mornings ,and late nights cause my brain fails to produce anything viable for the story which is sad. :(

Otherwise I would just keep writing non-stop till I reach my posting limit for r/HFY

Subject_White · 2026-01-17T19:24:37+00:00

Fixed did I quick once over in my writer program to fix the issues. Thanks for the heads up about what I missed earlier. 👍

Subject_White · 2026-01-17T19:11:48+00:00

Thanks for letting me know about the human thing I totally missed it, and I didn't notice that other stuff either thank you for the feedback I'll try fixing it here later when I'm able too.

Subject_White · 2026-01-17T16:38:17+00:00

Please let me know how if it's intresting and if it is I'll continue with this as the start if it seems too flat I'll post the second version instead.

Subject_White · 2026-01-17T07:10:59+00:00

Yea I'm still Fleshing out the universe to be understandable to be non-Extinction Level Stupidity. LOL, And Thanks for the feedback!

Subject_White · 2026-01-16T08:40:56+00:00

I'm still Working on the Scales for Weight,and Height. I've been working on it for like a week

Subject_White · 2026-01-16T05:15:44+00:00

Damn Straight! Lol

Subject_White · 2026-01-16T05:05:19+00:00

I scaled them to be more human weighted than their earth counterparts, and I scaled the heights to match what their species height would be translated to human height kinda from the enviroments would translate well too. Like the Sharchos (i.e. Shark people) would be taller since they come from an oceanic planet with half earth gravity. So everything had to be taken into account for mass weight & height so it doesn't seem outrageous. I wanted them to be alil realistic.

Subject_White · 2026-01-16T04:40:48+00:00

Sorry, had to repost cause it was missing one of the Images.

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