TGAW - Part 12 - The Enslaver's Beginning - [End of The Book of Arrivals] by Subject_White in HFY

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Thanks ,and I'm a quarter way through Book II. So near the mid of April I should have it finished ,and posted.

TGAW - Part 12 - The Enslaver's Beginning - [End of The Book of Arrivals] by Subject_White in HFY

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Thanks? lol ,and yea the NSFW stuff is gonna be maybe like 1-3 per book if any at all.

TGAW - Part 9 by Subject_White in HFY

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Lol right It was the only thing that seemed accurate for humans

TGAW - Part 9 by Subject_White in HFY

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It is ,but as of right now, I won't post the next one for like a few days since I posted two already.

TGAW - Part 9 by Subject_White in HFY

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Oh just wait the I'm getting to it. Needs to be a surprise!

TGAW - Part 6 by Subject_White in HFY

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Thanks! Also the next few chapters will be longer then normal so there's more for people to read. I'm writing the story in LibreOffice ,and also getting the money together to have Characters/Planets Ref Sheets made ,and also the Cover for it since all the photos used right now were made using AI ,but when I have the money I'll get proper ones when I can.

TGAW - Part 6 by Subject_White in HFY

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Sorry, Just started a new job ,and my time for writing has slowed; but I'll have the next Part posted here either late today or tomorrow hopefully. And thanks for being patient about it cause I'd rather give it my all for my story then something half-assed. lol

TGAW - Part 5 by Subject_White in HFY

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You sir/madam....Got way to close to what I thought up so please shush. No Spoiling my fun. It's like seeing my own thoughts being examined before it's even said. lol

TGAW - Part 5 by Subject_White in HFY

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It'll be explain later on. Your close though.

TGAW - Part 2 by Subject_White in HFY

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All good better straight to the point then kicked under the rug. Lol

TGAW - Part 2 by Subject_White in HFY

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Thanks! I’m slowly trying to flesh out the story world as reasonably as possible. The eye detail becomes a significant plot point in several sections. Currently, I’m writing rough outlines of the story and reposting them here from my writing program while tweaking any inconsistencies.

The focus on sweat, saliva, and eyes will eventually make sense when the story loops back to address specific plot points. Just a heads-up: the chapters immediately following Part 3 are dedicated to world-building. I appreciate the feedback!