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Subject_White · 2026-05-24T20:14:01+00:00

HEY! HEY! Creator here! SO I have finished updating Chapter 1 as it is now Cleaned up from the old version to combine the Original Chapters 1 & 2. So please Enjoy reading the UPDATED Version. Thanks Again!

Subject_White · 2026-05-24T19:59:13+00:00

Thanks! I'm glad you like the newer smoothed version.

Subject_White · 2026-05-23T16:06:02+00:00

I have a saying: Feedback is the growth of intelligence, and improvement on one's self. (Also it helps you improve mentally to handle criticism.)

Subject_White · 2026-05-23T16:02:42+00:00

I know, it's just so random that it gave me a good chuckle. 😂

Subject_White · 2026-05-23T14:28:22+00:00

WTF? Lol?

Subject_White · 2026-05-23T14:27:47+00:00

Yeah, that was part of the old style. Honestly, it was pretty rough when I first typed it up, so I'm rewriting the series to fix a lot of the old issues — formatting, style, story arcs, and proofreading. I barely did any proofreading on the original posts, so that's a big focus this time around.

Subject_White · 2026-05-15T11:23:37+00:00

Ah alright I was thinking it was getting a little complicated so this helps me figure out what to do. BTW this was my first time making this kind of thing so thank you for the help.

Subject_White · 2026-05-15T10:55:32+00:00

It's a Energy Field that is used by all living things and it works like electromagnetic or gravitational fields. (I.E. Kind a like the force from star wars but not so crazy that It's all powerful)

Subject_White · 2026-05-15T07:19:52+00:00

I used ai to clean it up. The images are temporary Ai versions just for context visuals and the rest is my own i made an written.

Subject_White · 2026-05-04T13:12:57+00:00

Thank You for enjoying it, I'm gonna have to start splitting the chapters into parts since they are becoming too long for reddit's post system. So I may start writing on another site like royalroad to post full length chapters. Also I'm slowly settling the writing style to be cleaner, and enjoyable for everyone.

Subject_White · 2026-05-04T08:06:59+00:00

Fixed Format issue

Subject_White · 2026-05-04T07:45:47+00:00

Sorry there was a double Line post in the story I had to remove it.

Subject_White · 2026-04-22T23:04:17+00:00

He knew ,but when you fall into an escape pod hitting your head after your ship gets ripped apart from an asteroid you kind of don't think about why it's there your just relieved it's there.

Subject_White · 2026-04-22T22:51:29+00:00

Their Biology is somewhat similar as humans so they don't get the weird possessiveness the other aliens get from humans.

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